My second story

Toa_lin

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Hey guys, I've finished writing a story out by hand in a note-book, not sure how long it is, and if I feel it isn't long enough, i'll simply wait till I have the next "chapter" finished, and combine the two...

Basically I'm here cus, though I know officially this should go under the Editor's Forum, I came here cus it's a BDSM story, and figured I might get better responses in asking someone to proof read it if i ask here ;)

And I'm just looking for a proof-read ,no big fancy editor stuff, simply cus I only have Note-pad to write it in, so no spell and grammer checker :rolleyes: And like my first story, i actually wrote this for my pyl, and she loved it and also suggested I post it here.

While she may not mind the errors i know are in it, I have the feeling you guys here on lit. might prefer it to be corrected :p

So if anyone feels up to the task, let me know, and I'll send you a copy. That's all, thanks for every1 who reads this' time and consideration
 
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catalina_francisco said:
I don't mind looking it over if you are still looking for someone.

Catalina :catroar:

Hehe, I'm in the middle of transferring it from note-book to an electronic copy, but once done, I'd b more tehn willing to let u look over it.
 
im not so good with editiong, but i cant wait to read it when its done
 
I'm sry about the delay on this.... My priorities have shifted drastically recently. My girl didn't get teh scholarship she needs to get into college.... She can't afford it without it, but refuses to take any money from me to work towards it... She's been raised with a certain stubborness against taking any form of "charity".... And right now I'm focussing mroe on holding "us" together, then finishing writing the story.... Sry, it might b a while b4 life gets back under control adn i can finish this.
 
Sorry life is stressing you right now and i hope you and yours get some relief soon.


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