My poem: Nil Tanya go vote for it tomorrow

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I love that poem yayati. Did you write it yerself? I am very impressed. I will make sure to vote for it next time I visit lit. heheheeeeee

 

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Two thumbs up, yayati. Another job well done, I'd say. ok

 

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Fantastic! I am going to write home about this one.

 

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Reading that poem made me want to live again. Thanks yayati.

 

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It sounds crazy, but I think I am in love with yayati.


Meri Pia.

 

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I have fantasies of yayati only wearing a thin piece of cloth whilst writing that marvellous poem. I urge all people to vote highly when they rate this super poem, it is breath taking.

 

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yayati i love u. i want to have yer babies plz

 

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dont go yayati I want to swallow your extremely large penes. Please help me yayati.

 

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I love this thread



Yayati- this gets a big

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P.S. I voted for Ron Kirk.

 

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[horny_giraffe]

I thanked God that great music was made,
For it is inferior in every way to the sounds made by
your neck.
Freezing my heart, still,
And holding it there;
For your angry tone sounds
Just as pleasant to me
As the sound made by the Indian flute.
At that moment I knew I had fallen
In love.

Most of it's pretty trite, but I love the way this section breaks up the monotony with it's clashing rythmn and even a good turn of phrase: "When your voice rose in anger it had risen like arctic ice."

It's sad that one's deepest emotions can come across sounding like just another silly love song. But ultimately, as Paul Mcartney sings "What's wrong with that?"

 

[lavendar]

Let me deflower you Yayati.

I'll fly you to Texas.

 

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Re: Re: My poem: Nil Tanya go vote for it tomorrow

 

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[lavendar]

Don't pack too much. I plan on keeping you naked and in my bed.

I'm checking for tickets right now. After exams, your sixpaq and your virgin ass are mine.

 

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Give me a link and I'll vote