My Grandma & Speeling Ain't Good

[Dingus Guy]

Dearest Editor Staff & Flunkies,

I wrote a story that has received much positive feedback from the moment I submitted it. Since that day I knew it needed editing, but I submitted it nonetheless. Now after much prodding by the people who have emailed me to continue the story, I am close to submitting a new version, restructured and I believe improved. Yet, I know that I still have problems with my past and present tense and would love to have someone help me with my final edit.

Here is the deal though, I want someone who actually liked the story that I have on Literotica now. The reason for this is that I want someone to tell me what the story needs, what they would like to see and most of all be honest with me about the new version compared with the old version. I would love the female perspective if possible. The story is "A Ghost of a Chance" and it is in the erotic horror category. I am still working on the story in my spare time, so it will be a little longer before I finish. I know I am asking a lot, but if you are interested in this task, please send me a little private message or just post here if it is more convenient. Thank you for your time.

 

[LadyCibelle]

PM sent

 

[snooper]

My Grandma & Speeling Ain't Good

Blame yore key broad, or yore trypewriter. I does.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Blame yore key broad, or yore trypewriter. I does.

Keyboard problem not, stupid I is, yerrrr...