My first story....

[thomcats]

... needs editing when it comes to spelling, a reviewer says. Since correct grammar, spelling and choice of words are extremely important to me, I ask kindly if anyone would have time to help and guide me through the mistakes I've made in my story.

I have read and re-read it many, many times but evidently that hasn't been enough.

English is not my native language and although I have lived with it for a long time, I don't have that "built-in" feeling for what exact words I should use in any given situation.

With many thanks in advance
thomcats

 

[LadyVer]

Providing the story category and word count would be helpful.

 

[bikoukumori]

Providing the story category and word count would be helpful.

That and a story summary.

 

[thomcats]

Providing the story category and word count would be helpful.

That and a story summary.

Hi to both of you, LadyVer and bikoukumori! And thanks for answering.

My story is in the EROTIC ROMANCE Category and is called "The All Or Nothing Game" with description line: "Little Red Riding Hood and The Big Bad Woolfe". It contains 37.970 words according MS Word specifications. Here it spreads over 12 pages.

The story is about how the make-up artist Eva Sanderson happens to join the world tour of the singer superstar Julian Woolfe and tells of their involvement with each other - irresistible seduction and sweet surrender. I hope this is sufficient, if not, feel free to ask for any additional fact.

Thank you and cheers!
thomcats

 

[bikoukumori]

How about what you'd tag it under?