My First Story is Live 🥳

[the_ontarian]

After years of being a reader-only, I've taken the plunge and written my first story. It's not longer pending review... it's published! And I'm happy to report that inside the first day it's at 1856 views with a 4.83 rating from 23 users.

If you'd like to check it out, it's at https://www.literotica.com/beta/s/discovering-kara-pt-01-sunrise

Feedback is certainly welcome. Glad to be part of the authors' community.

 

[SamScribble]

Good luck!

 

[Rustyoznail]

It's a good feeling, isn't it?

Well done.

 

[KeithD]

Congrats. Welcome aboard.

 

[mynameisben]

Well, I gave it a read. I can see why your story is so highly rated so far. It's a real gem. It's very well written, and the story is quite hot. The sexy interplay between the two main characters, the dance of seduction, is the real strength of the story. The dialog flows quite naturally, and not a word of it is wasted. The story even has a compelling cliffhanger ending. I liked it a lot, and I made my contribution to a well deserved five-star rating. I can't wait to read the sequel, and I'm certain I won't be disappointed.

I could only find two mistakes in your writing, and they are really quite minor. But then, I'm a real stickler about that sort of thing. If you're at all curious about what they might be, just let me know and I'll point them out to you in a PM.

Welcome to the AH! What took you so long?


Ben

 

[lovecraft68]

Congrats

If you want to get some opinions from the board start a thread on the feedback forum and post the link.

 

[MColton84]

Congratulations! I will be sure to check it out. It's an awesome feeling when you first put one out there, I'm glad it was well received. Keep it up.

 

[BobbyBrandt]

After years of being a reader-only, I've taken the plunge and written my first story. It's not longer pending review... it's published! And I'm happy to report that inside the first day it's at 1856 views with a 4.83 rating from 23 users.

If you'd like to check it out, it's at https://www.literotica.com/beta/s/discovering-kara-pt-01-sunrise

Feedback is certainly welcome. Glad to be part of the authors' community.

Congratulations.

Based upon the comments of others here, I look forward to reading your story. However, I won't do that until it is complete.

Take your time, and enjoy the process. I just have a personal preference not to read incomplete stories.