My First Story: "A Day in the Life of a Schoolgirl"

Renada85

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Ok... I can't say this story is new, but my knowledge of the CHYOO forum's existance is. I just found out that CHYOO had a discussion forum today, thanks to a random google search out of curiosity. Uh.. anyway.. that's not the topic of this thread.

My first CHYOO story, which I started back in October 2007, is actually my first erotica story, period. Interactive or not. Uh... however, for the last 5 years, I've been doing little written "RPs" or "Roleplays" with various people online, mostly sexual in nature, and that's basically like writing a story, but between two people, and with you playing as only one of the characters. It's sorta like... well, this.. but actively ongoing and you can do whatever you want and are not limited to choices. Er.. anyway, the point.

A Day in the Life of a Schoolgirl

My interactive story is.. well, it's basically a story where you play as a... I guess, "typical" schoolgirl character straight out of some random Hentai universe. That being the case, the story's "sex-scenes" can pretty much end up involving any kind of Hentai scene one can think of, whether it's plain 'ol straight sex, or what Hentai is more known for, the tentacle monsters. :p Uh... that being the case, I actually made this story solely because I couldn't find very many decent 2nd-Person-View stories that involved just that, tentacle sex. Uh.. I'm sure you'll find, if you read my story, that there are a couple branches that lead to just that.

However, what I made this thread for, is well... since it's a story that's open to all sorts of various types of Hentai, and not just my favorite kinds, I was hoping to maybe get some detailed suggestions for other types of scenes.. or maybe even attract some good writers that are better than I am that can contribute to the story. :)

So... with that in mind, would anybody like to offer up some scene suggestions, advice, opinions, or perhaps even contributions for my story? I'd certainly be grateful, as sometimes these stories are so much more enjoyable when you don't already know what's going to happen because you wrote it yourself. xD

Also.. just for the heck of it, here are my story's current "statistics":

Title: A Day in the Life of a Schoolgirl
POV: 2nd Person (Female)
Number of Writers: 7 (Including Myself)
Deepest Thread: 28
Total Number of Threads: 76 (I had to count from the story map, so I'm not sure how accurate that is. xD)
 
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