I've delighted in visiting literotica on and off for years now. Every now and then I remembered that it existed, then took a tour through some of my favourite genres.
Finally I bit the bullet and decided to post and the feedback has been constructive and positive so far, in the form of comments.
One of the key things that I would like an opinion on is the pacing, but if anyone has an opinion on any aspect of my first three chapters that would be greatly appreciated.
Oh and the most likely thing to come up; Etienne is a boys name and I've given it to a girl; but her full name is Etiennette. It has been shortened to improve reading, but I didn't realise that Etienne was a boys name at that point.
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-03
Finally I bit the bullet and decided to post and the feedback has been constructive and positive so far, in the form of comments.
One of the key things that I would like an opinion on is the pacing, but if anyone has an opinion on any aspect of my first three chapters that would be greatly appreciated.
Oh and the most likely thing to come up; Etienne is a boys name and I've given it to a girl; but her full name is Etiennette. It has been shortened to improve reading, but I didn't realise that Etienne was a boys name at that point.
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-03
