my 2nd lit story is live now.

[Anjalisinha]

https://www.literotica.com/s/my-wild-train-journey-ch-02


show some love or critisim am up for both

 

[Rob_Royale]

I've added chapter 1 to my reading list but notice chapter 2 is in loving wives, which is fine. It will probably not get a warm reception there as few stories do. It's a tough category.

 

[Anjalisinha]

Now I can change it ?
Because this 2 chapter was about character development so I thought I should select loving wife category.
It has so direct action like part 1
It’s about divya brain

 

[Rob_Royale]

Now I can change it ?
Because this 2 chapter was about character development so I thought I should select loving wife category.
It has so direct action like part 1
It’s about divya brain

Loving Wives is specifically about non-monogamy.

 

[Anjalisinha]

ok, got your point. btw, cheating wife doesn't fall under the loving wife category? That's why I selected this category

also am planning my future story under Group Sex Category ? of this series becasue all parts will be of gangbangs now what do you suggest?

 

[Rob_Royale]

ok, got your point. btw, cheating wife doesn't fall under the loving wife category? That's why I selected this category

also am planning my future story under Group Sex Category ? of this series becasue all parts will be of gangbangs now what do you suggest?

Cheating wife is fine there but the readers there can be cruel. Have a thick skin is what I'm saying. I was just trying to warn you. Group sex seems fine.

 

[Anjalisinha]

thanks

Cheating wife is fine there but the readers there can be cruel. Have a thick skin is what I'm saying. I was just trying to warn you. Group sex seems fine.

Yes, i saw the user's rating in the second one no issuse I have thick skin I guess

btw, you read both or any ? till now

 

[Rob_Royale]

If I like the first one, I will certainly read the second. I'll dabble in most any category. I have not yet done so, because I took a long weekend have gotten a lot of writing done myself. My newest story posts tonight.

 

[Gamblnluck]

The way you formatted your story honestly threw me off. Read more like a script than a story.

 

[Anjalisinha]

The way you formatted your story honestly threw me off. Read more like a script than a story.

Noted I was also in doubt.

Am new to this

But my next story has 10 12 character what should I do ?

 

[Gamblnluck]

Noted I was also in doubt.

Am new to this

But my next story has 10 12 character what should I do ?

work your dialog into paragraphs. I'll tell you now that 10 to 12 characters in a shorter story is very difficult to manage. I've written some long involved stories that have multiple characters. They do not have to interact. You probably can combine several or just mention them. Something else you do not need to do is give each one a history and first and last names. I'd have to see the story and what it entails to give more specific advice.

 

[MohanSingh]

48 strangers is a mad number. Keep it simple.

 

[Anjalisinha]

work your dialog into paragraphs. I'll tell you now that 10 to 12 characters in a shorter story is very difficult to manage. I've written some long involved stories that have multiple characters. They do not have to interact. You probably can combine several or just mention them. Something else you do not need to do is give each one a history and first and last names. I'd have to see the story and what it entails to give more specific advice.

Are you willing to be the co-editor? You mean?
am open to it, actually am looking for it

 

[Anjalisinha]

48 strangers is a mad number. Keep it simple.

Simple as in? 48 strangers just came to mind while writing First past what I'm writing currently is exceeding that number. Will it be bad? now my stories will loose count I meant to say becasue it will be from Divya POV

 

[calmlikeabomb]

Congratulations! it's always good to see desi authors around.

 

[Anjalisinha]

Congratulations! it's always good to see desi authors around.

what? didn't got you
Undo these chains ,my friend
I'll show you the pain I've hidden

 

[calmlikeabomb]

what? didn't got you
Undo these chains ,my friend
I'll show you the pain I've hidden

Oh that's just my signature. It's paraphrasing lyrics from one of my favourite songs.