My 1st Story

[MzSweetCandy]

Hey it's MzSweetCandy just thought i put my 1st story up
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=376080

comments and ratings are very welcome would love to hear what you lot have ta say or if you got any ideas yourselfs ok thanks peace mwah x x x x

 

[Anna_Malia75]

You might want to post a thread in the Story Feedback Forum. There's a whole group waiting over there to sink their claws into a - I mean, to help out a new writer.