Mountain Man

[myass_yourhand]

I've been longing (aching!) for a nice story about a busty 20-something running across a mountain man that saves her from some peril she encounters in the woods (maybe a bear attack). My fantasy relies around him having certain attributes, but is very open-ended. The attributes I have in mind are:

he should be tall (at least 6'4")
muscular, but not "cut"
smart - like, reads...books. *sigh, how i long for this*

Like I said, I don't really have a plot in mind but just long for a story/stories about this kind of manly man. I've ran across a couple, but the men are mostly country idiots and don't fit the bill of the giant I'm lookin for.

I'd love to hear people's thoughts or additions to this. Happy reading and screwing!

 

[darkbeast]

Is this more of a romance tale? I like the idea of the rugged mountain philosopher type, a bookish man who took to a Thoreau-esque escape of civilization. He's lived a decade or so in the wild, became quite laconic. His outward appearance is wild, unkempt, almost barbaric.

The woman is a hiker, sprained ankle and in peril.

The story can go to a romantic coupling or something more forceful, or what I'd like to see, a story where she spends her time recuperating trying to attract his attention, trying to seduce him until finally he gives in.

 

[JMaxwell69]

I like the idea of an injury requiring recuperation in the mountain man's spartan cabin. It should be so deep in the wilderness that it is not safe for him to leave the damsel alone. Of course, he has no modern communications gear, and the damsel's cell phone may be lost or damaged.

I further like her being caught out in severe weather (i.e. thunderstorms and flashfloods.) This gives an excuse for our damsel to get out of drenched clothes down to say... a pair or turquoise panties that accentuate her shapely backside, and may increase the need for physical contact if it is quite cold.

Living in a remote cabin disjoint from modern society, that could be a good life. Provided, a.) you don't go too Uni-bomber with it, b.) you have sweet damsels falling into your lap at least occasionally.

 

[myass_yourhand]

He's lived a decade or so in the wild, became quite laconic. His outward appearance is wild, unkempt, almost barbaric.

The woman is a hiker, sprained ankle and in peril.

The story can go to a romantic coupling or something more forceful, or what I'd like to see, a story where she spends her time recuperating trying to attract his attention, trying to seduce him until finally he gives in.

Yes darkbeast! I love the idea of him being laconic, but wild at the same time. And the injury is perfect, requires that she spend a lot of time with him, as JMaxwell pointed out. I personally love forceful and think that should be how the first fucking happens. She's undressing and vulnerable and he sees her, but can't stop himself from taking her right there. The following times could maybe be about her seducing him...lovely!

I like the idea of an injury requiring recuperation in the mountain man's spartan cabin. It should be so deep in the wilderness that it is not safe for him to leave the damsel alone. Of course, he has no modern communications gear, and the damsel's cell phone may be lost or damaged.

I further like her being caught out in severe weather (i.e. thunderstorms and flashfloods.) This gives an excuse for our damsel to get out of drenched clothes down to say... a pair or turquoise panties that accentuate her shapely backside, and may increase the need for physical contact if it is quite cold.

J, you read my mind - down to the turquoise panties! The cold would be perfect - sharing body heat leads to grinding, leads to groping, leads to lots and lots of cumming!

 

[myass_yourhand]

Living in a remote cabin disjoint from modern society, that could be a good life. Provided, a.) you don't go too Uni-bomber with it, b.) you have sweet damsels falling into your lap at least occasionally.

a.) The Uni-bomber attacking our damsel is another story all together!

b.) They just need to know where all these rugged mountain men are and they'd be running to "fall!"

 

[JMaxwell69]

I personally love forceful and think that should be how the first fucking happens. She's undressing and vulnerable and he sees her, but can't stop himself from taking her right there.

J, you read my mind - down to the turquoise panties! The cold would be perfect - sharing body heat leads to grinding, leads to groping, leads to lots and lots of cumming!

Yes, I guess if one were living on one's own in the wilderness for years, the first hottie that comes along is going to be in for a bit of a mauling of sorts.

Sharing body heat with the turqoise panties press up against his stiff log so it's like a big weiner in a nicely shaped bun so to speak, something interesting is bound to happen.

 

[darkbeast]

This concept is growing on me (something is growing at least). I was thinking another plot element needs to be added regarding why she is in the mountainous region all by herself. Is someone liking for her? Does she want to be found? Is there someone she fears more than our rugged protagonist?

Where does the story lead? I sort of like the idea of her eventually returning to civilization only to be bore and annoyed at the men, causing her to return to the wild.

 

[JMaxwell69]

This concept is growing on me (something is growing at least). I was thinking another plot element needs to be added regarding why she is in the mountainous region all by herself. Is someone liking for her? Does she want to be found? Is there someone she fears more than our rugged protagonist?

Where does the story lead? I sort of like the idea of her eventually returning to civilization only to be bore and annoyed at the men, causing her to return to the wild.

I agree it needs to be explained why she is in the mountains alone (of course, you could always simplify this by killing off her compatriots - i.e. friends go off the cliff but she narrowly avoids disaster), but it probably doesn't need to be a complex explanation.

Greenhorns underestimate Mother Nature all the time and think they can do things they can't really. E.g. The book "Into the Wild" tells the true story of a recent college graduate that went into Denali alone and got trapped on the wrong side of a river that only flowed seasonally and died of starvation. I bet he would have gone gay for Grizzly Adams by the end.

 

[myass_yourhand]

Where does the story lead? I sort of like the idea of her eventually returning to civilization only to be bore and annoyed at the men, causing her to return to the wild.

I like this a lot too, darkbeast. She has to return for her manly man. I think there could definitely be multiple chapters and offshoots....and lots of shooting off! Oh, what a pun! ZING!

 

[myass_yourhand]

I agree it needs to be explained why she is in the mountains alone (of course, you could always simplify this by killing off her compatriots - i.e. friends go off the cliff but she narrowly avoids disaster), but it probably doesn't need to be a complex explanation.

Killing her compatriots is super-cool with me. Maybe just one male compatriot and he gets killed while trying to show off (pulling in the greenhorn theme). Rock climbers maybe? I agree that it doesn't need to be complex, some simple "slip" would do fine.

 

[JMaxwell69]

Killing her compatriots is super-cool with me. Maybe just one male compatriot and he gets killed while trying to show off (pulling in the greenhorn theme). Rock climbers maybe? I agree that it doesn't need to be complex, some simple "slip" would do fine.

The way you jump at the idea of X-ing a traveling companion kind of makes it seem like you have someone in mind.

I'm... just... sayin'.

 

[myass_yourhand]

The way you jump at the idea of X-ing a traveling companion kind of makes it seem like you have someone in mind.

I'm... just... sayin'.

Why, I don't know what you mean!

 

[JMaxwell69]

Why, I don't know what you mean!

She said hands clasped behind her back, looking skyward, and rolling up onto the balls of her feet.

 

[myass_yourhand]

She said hands clasped behind her back, looking skyward, and rolling up onto the balls of her feet.

...biting her lower lip.

 

[JMaxwell69]

Now we've all got to know whether it is an ex-, a boyfriend, a family member, or other that is going to plummet off the the precipice and suffer multiple compound fractures in each leg and have an agonizing last few earthly moments before succumbing to severe spurting blood loss.

Spill!

 

[myass_yourhand]

Now we've all got to know whether it is an ex-, a boyfriend, a family member, or other that is going to plummet off the the precipice and suffer multiple compound fractures in each leg and have an agonizing last few earthly moments before succumbing to severe spurting blood loss.

Spill!

Oh, DARLIN! You sure know how to make a girl's day. Honestly, I didn't really have anyone in particular in mind UNTIL you described his demise! I have an ex who would do lovely in that role. He also had ideas of being Grizzly Adams, but failed oh so miserably.
Turned out to be a bit of a psycho -- that's what I get for courtin' a horror writer. Maybe I'll have better luck with erotica writers.

 

[JMaxwell69]

Oh, DARLIN! You sure know how to make a girl's day. Honestly, I didn't really have anyone in particular in mind UNTIL you described his demise! I have an ex who would do lovely in that role. He also had ideas of being Grizzly Adams, but failed oh so miserably.
Turned out to be a bit of a psycho -- that's what I get for courtin' a horror writer. Maybe I'll have better luck with erotica writers.

See now, there is excellent story potential. Wanna-be Grizzly Adams is killed being a greenhorn, the real thing rescues you, warms you (first from the outside and then from the inside), he makes sure you are physically able to sustain his ravaging, and then he has his way with you always making sure you stay off your bad ankle through the rough bestial process in which he takes you.

I can't say there are no crazy erotica writers, but some aren't.

 

[subwannabe]

I think if her friends were killed maybe it would kill the mood. Maybe they were hiking together and got scared in different directions by a bear and she got lost in the woods.

 

[JMaxwell69]

I think if her friends were killed maybe it would kill the mood. Maybe they were hiking together and got scared in different directions by a bear and she got lost in the woods.

It sounds like the OP could come to grips with this one particular person's bloated corpse being washed up on the rocky bank in some gorge.

This, in fact, might be why there is no search party up on the mountain, because they are looking for her dead body in the river. They think she suffered the same fate and don't realize how far the body floated. After a while they begin to suspect her body might never be recovered.