Monsters Inc. but for Succubi/Incubi

[PennyThompson]

Angi is recently graduated from Succubus University, and just got her first job at the Energy Plant. In the Sex Demon Dimension, their civilization is powered by human sexual energy (in the same way that the Monsters Inc. world is powered by the screams of children).

Angie's job is to slip through a random dimensional closet door every night to visit a sleeping adult, and drain their sexual energy by whatever technique she specializes in.

Some of the professional sex demons specialize in Traditional Incubacy, sitting on top of their victims and having sex with them. Others specialize in Sleep Paralysis, Wet Dreams, Morning Wood/Morning Bean, etc.

They have different physical forms, different techniques, different "clientele," which is how their industry refers to their victims. After stealing a human orgasm, they use a harvesting device to collect the sexual energy and transfer it to their dimension.

Angi graduated with a solid C-, and isn't very good at her job yet. She's a little on the chubby side, she's shy, awkward, a little clumsy... But she wants to be the best Succubus she can be!

How does her first week on the job go, and how does she find her niche?

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Lots of people find bumbling, chubby, shy girls incredibly attractive. Can she appear in their dreams and be the wilting flower who responds to attention?

--Annie

 

[PennyThompson]

Lots of people find bumbling, chubby, shy girls incredibly attractive. Can she appear in their dreams and be the wilting flower who responds to attention?

--Annie

Maybe she's able to crack the most difficult clients who are psychologically resistant to aggressive demonic seduction... But might feel obligated to help out a sweet, nervous demon girl who just wants to do a good job

 

[Rob_Royale]

This sounds like fun. Maybe her rival is a gorgeous thing, capable of inducing an orgasm with a seductive look.

Her niche? She likes parties.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

This sounds like fun. Maybe her rival is a gorgeous thing, capable of inducing an orgasm with a seductive look.

Her niche? She likes parties.

You mean like Orgazmo in the movie of the same name? Literally just causing spontaneous orgasms? Can she curse someone, say, "Will orgasm whenever a man slaps her butt," or "Orgasms whenever he looks at a woman's boobs"?

--Annie

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

I’d say she had poor test results but her real world experience ends up putting her on top of the leaderboard.

See, they get the biggest amount of sexual energy from the sexually frustrated or people who want sex but don’t have a lot of it.

So yeah, her more conventionally attractive, confident coworkers can easily get letharios to orgasm but the earnings are minimal.

Angie meanwhile pops in, bungles for a bit and her “clients” wind up finding her adorable and a lot more approachable.

Nerd sees a woman who looks like they walked out of a VS fashion show and are in full lioness mode? They are going to be intimidated.

Cute girl who stops in the middle of her seduction to ask about their hobbies? They are locked in.

What’s more, some of her coworkers call her up for help. Their clients are into them…but they’d really like to see them get dominated by a woman they find a lot more relatable.

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

I think another fun thing to do would be to have her coworkers try to trip her up only to let her instead get acclaim from seemingly impossible feats.

Her rotation gets switched and she winds up with a client who is ace. Normally her coworkers wouldn’t even bother but Angie is determined and winds up befriending the client and uses her dream powers to let the stressed out client live out a stress free day. Client then reveals she is ace, but she’s not sex repulsed and she actually enjoys helping her partners get off (maybe one of Angie’s flaws is that she enjoys sex a bit too much and can’t be composed (so she makes goofy O-faces, etc)) and she can tell Angie likes her.

So she and Angie have sex and her client has an orgasm as well. While Angie didn’t get much from it, her coworkers stupidly made her the only client so she still meets quota and Angie’s manager praises her for taking on such a difficult situation

 

[Husky_Embrace]

As is customary, I'll fill in way too many details already.

She's maybe shy, awkward and clumsy, but she just got a boost in confidence that she's allowed to go through a door. She holds that thought in her mind as the door arrives. The idea gripped firmly in her mind, her awkwardness and shy nature finally can't take hold.

It fuels her. Her first night, her first extraction. One of the most prestigious things a succubus can do, and she's doing it. To hell with her C-! She'll rock this person to the moon and back!

Whatever she chooses as a technique, it goes extraordinary well. Her confidence makes the person puddy in her hands. Their ecstasy easily riding high. Then the mistake happens. Maybe something "regular," like her rising her hips too high and crashing onto his cock in just the wrong way to harm them. It could be a holy symbol of a religion suddenly coming out, like her banging too hard against the headboard causes a shelf to buckle, releasing a Quran (not sure how to spell it in English) or Bible, crosses or half moons onto her. A religious person like a nun walks in as she is banging someone in their care. Or maybe a demon related weakness, like she gets shackled. Instead if it being plastic or steel, it is made of cold iron.

This causes her to fail and flee when able. Back through the door with injured pride and possibly injured body.

As per the rules she's still allowed a door a day that full week, but it is a black mark on her. We follow her for the next few days as she tries to find her way back. Maybe she gets help from an unexpected corner, like a friend of seeming rival that takes pity, and they steal a door in the brightest of day where she helps the protagonist to a win.

Over the course of her week she gets some confidence back, but is running away in the real test before she's got the chance to truly work on them. If you don't try, you at least don't fail on your skill. Or what she's doing are seen as minor sexual achievements, like a wet dream being in the low end of sexual powers for example.

The second to last day she goes in, and finally coaxes a real orgasm out of someone. Victory! Though she's celebrated by some when she returns, they realise it is far from enough. A single orgasm/only one strong orgasm in a week where many are expected? She's on the chopping block. It seems hopeless.

Then she pulls out the big guns. Facing her fears, she goes through a gauntlet. Either she goes in one door after another, or more to a climax, she goes in at a demure party and seduces them all to start an unexpected orgy. With her excessive feat of convincing so many platonic people to go at it like rabbits she is heralded as an expert in her field. And because I think personalities do not 180 that easily, she is a lot more confident, yet still awkward and shy at times. Respected by her peers, finally held in high regard by the teachers.

This way we have it all. Drama for her failure. Stakes as she might fail her long held dream. A cornucopia of sexual acts, including the creative wet dreams, sleep paralysis, etc. that can be explored as she grows in that week. The possibility of varying numbers of sexual partners each day. A clear purpose that we can follow as she bangs a few people into the stratosphere. It can be raunchy and engaging at the same time.

Maybe you could tie in more of the original movie, where a person is accidentally taken back to the demon dimension, but I think there's already plenty of story to write without that.

 

[Nightscream89]

What if...

She goes to the home of an aspiring fashion designer. She chose him from a list of potential targets after reading his file.

Guido Jilez
Age 29
Last time with a woman: 11 years ago
Shut in his home
Obsessed with his work

Of course info sheet had a back side which she didn't read.
Gay
Last time with a man: 2 weeks ago
Aspiring fashion designer
Projected to achieve his goals in fashion

Maybe someone deliberately set it up like this, knowing she would probably not read the back.
THis target was clearly meant for an Incubus, not a Succubus.

However Guido takes pity on the chubby Succubus with low sex appeal. Of course he won't sleep with her (In his words, "Gross".) However he fows to turn her into an absolute diva that will drain any man that she wants. Claiming that any good designer can make any woman shine (like a diamond.)

And thus the story of Angi and Guido, The Succubus and her Gay best friend starts. Conquering the fashion world and men's hearts world wide. While Guido raises to stardom as a designer, Angi grows more powerfull, beautifull and confident with each man she conquers while she becomes famous as well as Guido's star model.

Of course at the incubus/succubus headquarters, she rises to stardom as well where he former classmates (Bullies?) can't believe what they are seeing. Will someone try to sabotage them?...
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Maybe I went a bit off the rails with this one, but this just came to mind when I read your idea.

 

[KittyOfSteele]

I feel like this is a setup for something like this:

But in all honesty I'm more interested in the Succubi/Incubi university part of the idea, like what kind of classes do they take, how are the politics in university, what is the staff like...