Mature ladies

[Edwina]

Two ladies in their mid fifties meet on the net after striking up conversation they start to discuss sex, or lack of it. One invites the other to discuss past exciting adventures which eventually leads to mutual masturbation.

Eventually they have a group of five which leads to some very horny story telling when recounting heterosexual and lesbian experiences and they decide to meet.

I AM DEBATING WIPING THIS IDEA COMPLETELY _ EDwina

[Edited by Edwina on 10-15-2000 at 04:18 PM]

 

[Memorydancer]

great Idea!

This sounds like it could be a series, esp if the ladies came from several different backgrounds.

 

[KillerMuffin]

Huhm. I thought about it, I really did, but I just don't think I could write the story effectively. You seem to have a way with words, Edwina. Perhaps you should take a stab at it? You're a judge, I'm sure you know how to write. Fiction is just like a legal brief Is there any difference?

If not, you could try beginning a thread on the sexual role playing board, but beware, the boards are addicting.

 

[Edwina]

Hmmm, food for thought.

My five ladies.

No 1, aged 64 Maria, widow of Director/Company president ( UK or US formula there.

No 2 aged 58 Pamela, Divorced. Company Sales Director

No 3, aged 55 Eleanor, Single Retired head mistress of a Girls school

No 4, aged 54 Hannah, widow - Garage owner

No 5 aged 48 Karen, divorced - Public House (Thats an inn or tavern) owner.

 

[KillerMuffin]

I would suggest you then write a 5 part story, start with #1, write it from her perspective, then move to #2 from her perspective, until you've done all of them. That could make it interesting. Different people think differently about things that are going on.

When I write, I begin with an outline of what I want to happen, starting with the main points.

I. He runs a grocery store, she accidently drives through the plate glass window and nearly runs over the bag boy and scares the Depends off of Mrs. Shimmler, the 97 year old checker. After calling the cops, he asks her out.
II. The big date. After her court date, she agrees to go out with him, but only if he buys, she has to pay for the window, some more depends, and a toupee for Billy, the bag boy, until his hair grows back.
III. Climax. Literally. Boomshackalacka horizontal mambo in the grocery store parking lot. He accidently slips the still running car (its cold outside) into gear and drives through the newly replaced plate glass window when he orgasms.

Since I'm a sloppy plotter, this is the extent of my preperation, then I go straight into story telling mode. Whispersecret, that talented beyond words lady, just opens up the word processor and starts writing.

Hurry up and write darn it! I wanna read your story!

 

[lawman882]

Would love to be the 38 y.o. man that is seduced by these 5 women.

 

[Edwina]

I think my idea for a story is a dead duck!

Only five inputs, suggestions that I write the story myself. I am capable but I would have preferred much more input.

If no further interest in 48 hrs then I shall wipe it from the site and possibly write a story in my own time and post it SOMEWHERE!!

 

[lawman882]

You sound bitter!...Maybe some of us just aren't the creative type.....

 

[Lucien_Al]

Lets give it a try

Hi Edwina,

I think your story idea sounds promising. I have written about 6 stories and am quite willing to give it a try provided you are happy that firstly I write when I get time so sometimes I tend to be a bit slow, and secondly I need someone to proof-read and give me some ideas when needed, particularly the lesbian scenes.

Drop me a note on zulu_40@hotmail.com and I will send one of my stories for you to look at.

Lucien