Mass Effect erotic fic

[MeanBlackjack]

Hey there,

Yeah so after a brief leave of absence I'm back writing fics. The only thing is, I have a lead-up to the sex but I'm just not sure as to which character pairing to use.

I'm torn between a Male Shepard and Emily Wong (Or Ashley)

or using the same set up and have it be Jacob and Kelly Chambers.

Yeah, so any players of the game interested in reading either fic?

Hope to hear from you soon,

MBJ

 

[PurrfectMoon]

Aww.. this is such a great idea.

When I played Mass Effect 2, I went down the love path with Garrus Vakarian as female Shepard. Such a great character, but i was disappointed with love scene ending!!

You should do those two!..

But if I had to pick from the two you have put out, I would say Jacob and Kelly Chambers, and I would definitely read it!

 

[MeanBlackjack]

Y'know it's funny you should mention Garrus and Shepard. I actually did write one with them continuing after the end of the love scene (Also, I was equally disappointed with the love scene. I have a total man crush on Garrus!)

Thank you very much for the feedback too!

 

[PurrfectMoon]

Ah ha! I just checked your submissions.

Commencing with the readings..

Thanks!

 

[LordOfHell]

I just wanted to go on record and state that this is the greatest thread ever.

 

[Faye_Skylark]

Brilliant thread!

I found the FemShep and Garrus scene really touching, but it definitely needed to be extended!

Also, I'd like to suggest using Thane for a story (if you haven't already done so - I'll go check your stuff now).

 

[MeanBlackjack]

Brilliant thread!

I found the FemShep and Garrus scene really touching, but it definitely needed to be extended!

Also, I'd like to suggest using Thane for a story (if you haven't already done so - I'll go check your stuff now).

I did try using Thane in a sex scene with Jack, but I wasn't very happy with the way his dialogue sounded. It sounded too mechanic, like I was writing for a Vulcan.

Also, I was thinking about doing a fic with Garrus and Fem Shep again, after the collector mission and everyone's alive. So, Garrus and Shepard maybe fool around with his omni tool and find the handcuffs setting?

 

[LordOfHell]

Hm. I did a story in which the protagonists were basically expies of Female Shepard and Matriarch Benezia. xD That was before I started writing for Literotica, so it was light on the sex.

One day, I'll find Sidonis--er, I mean, rewrite the story--and correct that.

 

[MeanBlackjack]

Go for it man! The more the merrier!

Also, as a side note. I need some help with some text for Mordin. When he's talking about himself does he refer to himself as 'I' or does he just ignore that part? What I've got so far is this:

“Told you to use creams, antihistamines! Offered you leaflets on pleasure zones and spots to avoid chafing! Warned Shepard as well. Thought she wouldn’t listen. *Sniff* Disappointed. Will have to take her to the infirmary.”

Garrus nodded and walked through the door as Mordin followed, scooping up various vials and sprays.

“What are those for?” He asked, as the two walked into the elevator.

“For reattaching Shepard’s skin tissue.”

“What?!” Garrus exclaimed, looking down at the smaller member of the team.

“Am curious to see the effects of Human-Turian relations. Will perform some surgery to see the effects internally.”

That look good? Or should I change it? Typical isn't it? I sit down to write Jacob and Kelly getting it on and end up doing another one about Garrus and FemShep

Cheers,

MBJ

 

[Faye_Skylark]

That Mordin dialogue is great! You really nailed the quick, erratic feel of his speaking I think. I think Mordin definitely skips any flourishes in language, he's very direct and abrupt, so what you've written feels write.

If you can, extend the scene with Mordin, he's my fav character!

As for Jack and Thane, not sure they're the best pairing, maybe that's why it wasn't working? Perhaps Thane and Tali instead?

 

[MeanBlackjack]

There's plenty of Mordin-speak coming up don't you worry

I've gone for a bit of a flip-flop with the latest story. Garrus is being overly aggressive with her, and in between the sex scenes we have Garrus and Mordin talking about Shepard and the fact that they've done the Batarian bounce, Salarian shuffle, Turian twist... Any other sexy names for the races?

Yeah, here's the thing I really don't like Tali or the Quarians in general. I could give it a shot if you like?

 

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