Maltese Fuckin, First Chapter

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Eve, I have to say you have outdone yourself. Your first chapter is awesome! You are a wonderful writer, and very gifted. I was rivited to the story right from the start. I commend you on a job well done. I cannot wait to see what the other writers come up with. I just know all the chapters will be super. I am patiently waiting to see more. Also, your series From Afar, is an incredible read. It does not surprize me at all, that you made it in the top 20. It is an honour well deserved. I will definately be reading your other series submitted. Keep up the great work! Katerina

 

[Laurel]

I agree- I can't wait to see the other two Ch. 1's! Eve's is amazing - totally in the old P.I. theme, AND very sexy!

 

[Endlessly]

Oooh, shit.. That was incredible, I am SO scared about my chapter now..

 

[Angel]

I'm with Endlessly...Totally awesome chapter and I'm scared shitless for when my turn comes. Ah well at least I have awhile

 

[Xander]

Holy shit Eve!!
That was great. I can see I really got a lot of plot-thinking to do before my chapter is due.
Incredible high standard settings from the beginning.

 

[*Eve*]

Gosh you guys have me blushing. I thank you so much for the wonderful feedback.

 

[Deborah]

Eve, I just read your story and I thought it was superb. I mean, really. It is so well-written and the plot is so fully developed. And so different than your other great stuff. I think an indication of an excellent writer is one who can move from one genre to another.

Obviously this is not your typical "slam bang thank you Ma'am, and thank you Sis, and thank you Granny and thank you Zeke story. But this is the kind of story that I personally like and wish there were many more of.

I suspect we have some readers out there who don't have the patience for this sort of story. Oh, well, tough shit. To each his/her own.

(I can see here I'm in danger of sending this twice and I hate to repeat myself. Oh well, see what happens)

 

[SpecialK]

Great first chapter Eve!! <insert round of applause and chants of "Bravo!" here>

(I'm so glad I didn't join this one! No way I'd be able to write a chapter following that!! Murder mysteries just aren't my style.) But let me say your chapter was a wonderful read, like Katerina, I'm hooked!

I can't wait to see what the others do with it!

K

 

[BeautyBabe]

Eve's chapter's great, but when I tried linking to Bent Ampersand's chapter, it went back to Eve's.

Am I going mad? Where is it?

Oh well, at least it wasn't internal server error, again!

 

[Laurel]

FTP error... crap. Fixed - sorry about that, Bent...

 

[Angel]

I read Bent Ampersand's chapter also and It was GREAT. So totally different from Eve's and yet it was awesome and original. I loved it! ::applaud::

 

[Deborah]

Kudos to Bent and Shintani. Great chapters dudes!

The most fascinating part of this to me is how the author who goes next can expand upon the tale (And get some tail. LOL! Shintani, you dog. But you and your characters still got a ways to go to catch up with the notches on Zeke's collar).

So where the fuck is Phantom? The opera? My trigger finger is getting itchy.

 

[*Eve*]

Shintani, that was a great read. It's kind of neat seeing something that you started and then reading what happens next. I can't wait to read the rest!

 

[Xander]

Shintani & Bent. Execellent writing.
Enjoyed both alot.

 

[Dakota Ryan]

Great job on all so far and I to am worried after all this fine writing if I can keep pace with the rest..... I sure hope the rest are as good as the first parts are....this could be one hell of a story.... woohooo

 

[BJ]

I thought your first chapte was real good.
I hope when my turn comes it will do as well.
Keep up the good writing