Make a haiku

[fire_breeze]

In the whisper of
my silent dreams, I hear the
echo of your breath.

 

[artlover637]

your understanding
could be wrong you know (can't it?)
I wish we could talk

 

[MrWhisper]

echo I hear
I hear echo

 

[Emerald_Lilly]

floating and drifting
swirling thoughts clouding my mind
I need to find calm

 

[okayterrific]

tired and hungry
need to go make something soon
too lazy for soup

 

[MrWhisper]

Thoughts swirl and twirl
Mind and cloud becoming one
Calm will bring back the sun

 

[luscious pearl]

My lips wrap around
gossamer benediction
I arch and cry out

 

[okayterrific]

haiku's are so fun
so many too serious
lighten up you fucks

 

[okayterrific]

mayhem fest looks cool
disturbed and godsmack headline
ears will ring for sure

 

[luscious pearl]

haiku's are so fun
so many too serious
lighten up you fucks[/QUOTE

you are so right, sir
thank you for changing the mood
laughing my ass off

 

[okayterrific]

these are so easy
do not even need to rhyme
very addicting

 

[okayterrific]

haiku's are so fun
so many too serious
lighten up you fucks[/QUOTE

you are so right, sir
thank you for changing the mood
laughing my ass off

you are most welcome
glad you got a laugh from that
this is so silly

 

[okayterrific]

new career perhaps?
write haiku's, publish a book
i'll stick with numbers

 

[cindy70s]

Breath ragged and short
Broken hearted and all alone
Sobs rack my body

 

[okayterrific]

easily amused
writing haiku's are like crack
rehab needed soon?

 

[luscious pearl]

you are most welcome
glad you got a laugh from that
this is so silly

yes it really is
so incredibly silly
but it made my night

 

[okayterrific]

yes it really is
so incredibly silly
but it made my night

how's tennessee now?
shoehorning syllables sucks
running on empty

 

[okayterrific]

going to sleep now
haiku's i bid you adieu
need 5 syllables

 

[okayterrific]

whole day, no haikus
cool thread, yet found on page 4
no talent needed

 

[Lost_Yonder]

bumping the haikus
morning rains bring quiet mind
crawling back to bed!

 

[artlover637]

Nearly three months now
why'd you simply disappear?
I really miss you.

 

[taborgirl]

i love you my dear
there will not be another
heart and soul are yours

 

[Wave_Rider]

The ocean guides ME,
Its power and movement dazzle;
Forever, Always

 

[juniata]

Quietly moaning
Breathless whispering echoes
Sleep surrendering

 

[RUlookingup]

Winter's icy grip
stubbornly relents again
to Spring's soft petals