Make a haiku

thankyou for your kind comment yesterday artlover
yours are wonderful


Soft murmers reach out
for touch -- two sighs colliding
predawn tangled sheets
 
hot winds paused eastward
valleys breathe lighter just now
respite for a day
 
improbable colors
foxtrotting slowly to earth
disguising Fall's chill
 
painted sculptures gleam
rounded shapes in angled pose
wind drifted leaf shapes
 
nice!

wind fingers probing
seeking fading colored masses
autumn's face appears
 
Last edited:
In my bed, shifting -
Memory, fragrant, awakened:
Your scent on the sheets.
 
Last edited:
FOR GODS SAKE PEOPLE THE VERSE FORM GOES LIKE THIS:

resplendent dimples
washed by early sunset hues
taste all of autumn

*sheesh*
 
FOR GODS SAKE PEOPLE THE VERSE FORM GOES LIKE THIS:

resplendent dimples
washed by early sunset hues
taste all of autumn

*sheesh*

a time out here, Dude!
what is your problem with verse?
a syllable off?

*lighten up! sheesh*

in alot of areas memory is pronounced memry, 2 syllables
 
Last edited:
Nothin' special just a purist.

washed up trite verses
have little place when strung out
through Japanese verse
 
were the world YOUR stage
it would be as you wish it
sadly for you: false
 
FOR GODS SAKE PEOPLE THE VERSE FORM GOES LIKE THIS:

resplendent dimples
washed by early sunset hues
taste all of autumn

*sheesh*

"Memory" can be pronounced with either two or three syllables, depending on where you come from. So if you're referring to mine, I agree: lighten up a bit.

I could have written it the old style "mem'ry" but that just seemed too pretentious.
 
Last edited:
Row of bronze soldiers
Waiting for winter's cold call:
Trees anchor the street.
 
Back
Top