Magic Lessons

[hotti]

By Ravenswing

It's a long story, but outstanding! Quite well written.

It's one that is difficult to appreciate all at once, at least for me, since I only made it to Chapter 4 before I died a wonderful little death

What an incredible effort, deserving many kudos!

You can find it here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=27993

This is definately one for the Top Lists!

 

[Ravenswing]

I'd like to thank hotti, and everyone else who sent feedback about Magic Lessons. It's all been great.

I've had people saying they like the plot development as well as the sex, and some who don't like that at all. I'm hoping that the next part can satisfy both groups.

For a first attempt at erotic fiction (it was written before Changing Channels) I suppose it's not bad to get highest rated Mind Control story, but I'm just going to have to do better with the next part

 

[hotti]

You're very welcome, Ravenswing!

I personally find stories WITH plot development a better read, and have experimented with that concept myself *G*. Although, stories without it have their places too <dirty little grin>!

As a first effort, yours is excellent, and I'm on my way to read your other one, too. I received a lot of encouragement after my first story, and it really helped me, so I try to encourage others, even if they really don't need it *S*.

Happy day