Mad World

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  • This story is very clever, lots of potential

    Votes: 2 50.0%
  • I like it but it's a little hard to follow.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • I think it's interesting but it needs a little work.

    Votes: 1 25.0%
  • I think it might work better in another timeline.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Too far fetched.

    Votes: 1 25.0%

  • Total voters
    4

spazmodious

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Ok this is a little differant than most of you guys a used to, it's kind of an experiment, try not to get too confused.

The basic story goes like this.....

In 1969 a young army officer is captured in Vietnam and placed in a tiger cage,
some P.O.W's find some form of escape by building a clock or a house in thier minds eye to pass the time and get thier mind off the horrible situation.....

But not this guy, he was always "over the top" he dreamed big, he made a whole new world of wonder.

He filled it with everything he had ever read,dreamed or thought.

It was populated by men, women and creatures of his subconscious mind.

Now if he were a normal man our story would end here, but he was differant...

he was a telepath, and with only his mind being the focus of his life it became stronger, it reached out and liked to others.

Anyone who had even the slightest telepathic ability was linked, and now instead of dreaming in the normal sense, they are taken to.....Mad World.
 
The way it works

It is basically a dream with many people joined in it, but it mirrors a real world, so it looks, feels, sounds, & tastes real.

But the participants a aware that it is a dream, and aware that it's not their dream, after a while if they get used to it and have a strong enough telepathic willpower they can make small changes, (i.e. a window becomes a door, a motorcycle becomes a car, small breasts become large)

But the Main dreamer Known only a "The Young Captain" has master control, his choices are set. if he says it's a door it's a door and that's it.

I will play the main role "The Young Captain" he is around but hardly ever seen, more of a narrator role than an active participant.

feel free to get in where ever you fit in.

Have fun and try to be nice to the other players.

And don't forget to answer the poll question and rate this thread!!!!
 
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The story begins

The Captain was in a forrest, he was not sure how he got there but it was better than where he was....though he could not remember now where it was he had been or what was so bad about it, but he was sure it was not worth remembering.

there was a broad trail leading to the north and he followed it for a while intill he came to a clearing, in it was a building tha looked like a miniature castle.

on closer inspection he found it was an inn, the place seemed to be mostly empty in that all the people he saw there were transparent,like phantoms.

just for fun he sat at the bar and asked for "a beer, a cigar, and a naked woman"
to his surprize , a cold bottle of beer slid down the bar and came to a stop in front of him, a cigar in an ashtray slid down after it, and befor he could ask for a light...a hand was off to his left with a lighter.

he turned to follow the hand up it's arm to find it's owner and behold it was a naked woman.

he lit the ciager and asked her "are you real?"

she gave him a wink and replyed, "I am as real as a dream can be, but if this is your dream or mine I cannot say"

He thought about that as he took a long pull from his beer, it tasted real to him. "real or dream it's been too long since I held a woman,why spoil it?"

and when he pulled her to him, and kissed her deeply, it was as real as he needed to be.
 
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