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Phillychocolatem said:
Thank you Victoria im more than willing to chip chip chip away at that pesky wall. After all I have 30yrs <right Wyld>
I have found that it is much easier to tear something down than it is to build it up. But the ones that do the building get the rewards, because it takes skill to build, anyone can tear down. So As I build Wylds spirit up, I walls will come down on their own. They were built to protect and shelter a woman who is getting stronger everyday. Im just glad to have the chance to be there when she breaks through and lets the entire world see the beauty that I know.
Another Brick Falls
by
WyldBreeze


It's the kindness you show every stranger,
The encouraging words for all,
Your acceptance of my imperfections,
Yes...another brick falls.

It's how you lovingly cherish your kids,
It's how you always call,
To tuck me in and keep the dreams at bay,
Yes...another brick falls.

It's your steady breathing as you sleep,
It's the way time stands still when my name you call,
The peace I feel when I lie in your arms,
Yes...another brick falls.

Your gaze, your touch, your soothing voice,
Compassion, sensuality, emotions caused,
It's all these nameless, little things,
That allow the bricks around my heart to fall.​
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
I'm beginning to hate you, is that what you want? I couldn't get to sleep last night... for these words I did find, kept on running through my mind.



Scattered Ash



Scattered ash upon the floor
Scattered from hearth to door.
Some is here, and some is there
Literally scattered everywhere.

Little piles of ashen gray
Not to see the light of day.
Words once warm, now are cold
Gone the feeling we had of old.

Scattered ash upon the floor
Clear a path from hearth to door.
Pack my case, tie it tight
For I shall disappear this night.

Scattered ash upon the floor
Endless piles of dust
Stepping through all that remains
Of the pillars of our trust.

Sweep aside the piles of ash
Heading for the door
For it is gone... what e'er we had
And I am here no more.

That is very deep my friend, (((((((((victoria))))))))))
 
A Single Regret
by
WyldBreeze


I fall asleep to the sound of your voice,
And awake to the thoughts of your touch.
I catch myself all through the day,
Blushing and missing you so much.

My dreams of you are perfect,
Every word, motion, and kiss.
Yet as perfect as those dreams may be,
They pale in the reality of this.

I long for your smile, your voice, your kiss,
Your devilish hands' delight.
I long for the way we taste each other,
I can't wait another night.

If I should die alone tonight,
I would have but a single regret.
I'd thank God for the moments we had,
But sorrow that it was so long before we met.​
 
WyldBreeze said:
A Single Regret
by
WyldBreeze


I fall asleep to the sound of your voice,
And awake to the thoughts of your touch.
I catch myself all through the day,
Blushing and missing you so much.

My dreams of you are perfect,
Every word, motion, and kiss.
Yet as perfect as those dreams may be,
They pale in the reality of this.

I long for your smile, your voice, your kiss,
Your devilish hands' delight.
I long for the way we taste each other,
I can't wait another night.

If I should die alone tonight,
I would have but a single regret.
I'd thank God for the moments we had,
But sorrow that it was so long before we met.​


aw that was sad...it made me tear up :( :rose:
 
Erotica_Writings said:
aw that was sad...it made me tear up :( :rose:
Awww, sweetie....don't cry...*hands EW a tissue*....It's not that sad if you think about it. I'm thankful for every little moment that I've had with him....and if something should happen, I'd die happy. I just regret that its taken this long to find him. ;) See? Not so sad. *hugs* :rose:
 
WyldBreeze said:
Another Brick Falls
by
WyldBreeze


It's the kindness you show every stranger,
The encouraging words for all,
Your acceptance of my imperfections,
Yes...another brick falls.

It's how you lovingly cherish your kids,
It's how you always call,
To tuck me in and keep the dreams at bay,
Yes...another brick falls.

It's your steady breathing as you sleep,
It's the way time stands still when my name you call,
The peace I feel when I lie in your arms,
Yes...another brick falls.

Your gaze, your touch, your soothing voice,
Compassion, sensuality, emotions caused,
It's all these nameless, little things,
That allow the bricks around my heart to fall.​

Thank you :rose: :kiss:
 
WyldBreeze said:
A Single Regret
by
WyldBreeze


I fall asleep to the sound of your voice,
And awake to the thoughts of your touch.
I catch myself all through the day,
Blushing and missing you so much.

My dreams of you are perfect,
Every word, motion, and kiss.
Yet as perfect as those dreams may be,
They pale in the reality of this.

I long for your smile, your voice, your kiss,
Your devilish hands' delight.
I long for the way we taste each other,
I can't wait another night.

If I should die alone tonight,
I would have but a single regret.
I'd thank God for the moments we had,
But sorrow that it was so long before we met.​

* wiping the tears from my eyes. * That is one of the most touching things I have ever read. You never have to think about being alone again.
 
Phillychocolatem said:
yeah but do you like? I hope no one minds.

How you doing today BabyD? * Hmmm that would sound soo sexy being said in a husky passion laden voice *
did I like? ooh yeah, I like... ;)
 
MrFantasyMan said:
Your hot, wet tongue
Lashes out
Against my sensitive flesh
As you lap up
The sweet nectar within
What you so crave
What I so need
My body arches
And I cry out
Moan
Surrendering to
The sweet invasion
My hands grip your head,
Anchoring me in the storm
You are slowly building within my body
Again and again
Your tongue lashes at me,
Caressing
Pulsing
Probing
Slowly driving me out of my mind
Until!
Oh God…
My body tightens
Shudders
A long low moan wrenching from my throat
As the waves of ecstasy sweep me away


MFM

I remember... only too well.... :kiss: :heart: :kiss:
 
Erotica_Writings said:
That is very deep my friend, (((((((((victoria))))))))))


*Wraps herself in the warm, tight hugs and is content*

Thank you Sweeter Sis :kiss: I am glad you like it. I know not what triggers the words... but these were coming fast... one right on the heels of the one before it. As stated, this one came to me just as I was preparing to lie down for the night. It kept running through my head for the next hour, not ceasing its rhyming until I'd written it down.

Too tired to rise to get pen and pad...
My mind remembered all the words it had.
Round and round the words did play
Never ceasing in the light of day.
 
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WyldBreeze said:
A Single Regret
by
WyldBreeze


I fall asleep to the sound of your voice,
And awake to the thoughts of your touch.
I catch myself all through the day,
Blushing and missing you so much.

My dreams of you are perfect,
Every word, motion, and kiss.
Yet as perfect as those dreams may be,
They pale in the reality of this.

I long for your smile, your voice, your kiss,
Your devilish hands' delight.
I long for the way we taste each other,
I can't wait another night.

If I should die alone tonight,
I would have but a single regret.
I'd thank God for the moments we had,
But sorrow that it was so long before we met.​

That is so soulful Wyld and sweet..nice..keep it up dear... :kiss: :rose:
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
I'm beginning to hate you, is that what you want? I couldn't get to sleep last night... for these words I did find, kept on running through my mind.



Scattered Ash



Scattered ash upon the floor
Scattered from hearth to door.
Some is here, and some is there
Literally scattered everywhere.

Little piles of ashen gray
Not to see the light of day.
Words once warm, now are cold
Gone the feeling we had of old.

Scattered ash upon the floor
Clear a path from hearth to door.
Pack my case, tie it tight
For I shall disappear this night.

Scattered ash upon the floor
Endless piles of dust
Stepping through all that remains
Of the pillars of our trust.

Sweep aside the piles of ash
Heading for the door
For it is gone... what e'er we had
And I am here no more.


{{{Victoria}}}...such elogence(sp) of word...I think it is good to put words to the light of our thoughts...this work is so meaningful and so full of emotion...it really emotes the passage of time and how we can long for the past... :kiss: :rose:
 
WyldBreeze said:
A Single Regret
by
WyldBreeze


I fall asleep to the sound of your voice,
And awake to the thoughts of your touch.
I catch myself all through the day,
Blushing and missing you so much.

My dreams of you are perfect,
Every word, motion, and kiss.
Yet as perfect as those dreams may be,
They pale in the reality of this.

I long for your smile, your voice, your kiss,
Your devilish hands' delight.
I long for the way we taste each other,
I can't wait another night.

If I should die alone tonight,
I would have but a single regret.
I'd thank God for the moments we had,
But sorrow that it was so long before we met.​


Beautiful Wyld... :kiss: :rose: ...this one and "Another Brick Falls" are just too good for words...I think you have found your stride and your words are so descriptive and heartfelt...to feel is such splendor...{{{Wyld}}}
 
I go through the motions
my head in the clouds
it’s one of those days
where I’m lost in the crowd
I need some relief
and I’m way overdue
for crumbcake and coffee
and morning with you..

I’m way over here
and you’re way over there
if love is the goal
then they’re not playing fair
for, only beside you
is everything right
with crumbcake and coffee
and kisses at night..

yes, crumbcake and coffee
and wishes we share
and calling your name
from the top of the stairs
I can’t wait to hold you
and love you complete
slip into my shadows
and stir up the heat...
cause crumbcake and coffee
were never this sweet...


MFM
 
I've included a title for you, is it ok?

MrFantasyMan said:
Crumbcake and Coffee


I go through the motions
my head in the clouds
it’s one of those days
where I’m lost in the crowd
I need some relief
and I’m way overdue
for crumbcake and coffee
and morning with you..

I’m way over here
and you’re way over there
if love is the goal
then they’re not playing fair
for, only beside you
is everything right
with crumbcake and coffee
and kisses at night..

yes, crumbcake and coffee
and wishes we share
and calling your name
from the top of the stairs
I can’t wait to hold you
and love you complete
slip into my shadows
and stir up the heat...
cause crumbcake and coffee
were never this sweet...


MFM



I like this one
It's clean,
Sweet, and neat...
And I love knowing
Crumbcake and Coffee
Were never this sweet!

I love the way you've companioned those special little 'touches' of love, of being together, be it morning or night... to the sweetness of Crumbcake and Coffee.
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:

I like this one
It's clean,
Sweet, and neat...
And I love knowing
Crumbcake and Coffee
Were never this sweet!

I love the way you've companioned those special little 'touches' of love, of being together, be it morning or night... to the sweetness of Crumbcake and Coffee.

lol.. he told me that he doesn't normally title his work... altho he did title one for me when I asked him to. I'm sure he won't mind ;)
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:

I like this one
It's clean,
Sweet, and neat...
And I love knowing
Crumbcake and Coffee
Were never this sweet!

I love the way you've companioned those special little 'touches' of love, of being together, be it morning or night... to the sweetness of Crumbcake and Coffee.


Thank you Victoria... :rose:
the title is fine (guess I should give my works titles?)...hehehe
it happens to be breakfast today... :rolleyes:
 
Emotes the passage of time. . .

MrFantasyMan said:
{{{Victoria}}}...such eloquence of word...I think it is good to put words to the light of our thoughts...this work is so meaningful and so full of emotion...it really emotes the passage of time and how we can long for the past... :kiss: :rose:


I thank you, my dear friend... .o0( I fixed spelling. ;) ) Yes, it is good to put words to the light of one's thoughts. At times, I feel it is all I have to give.

The words were coming so quickly, one right on the heels of the one before, and e'en though I was not going to get up for pad and pen... I knew they would rumble round in my head until I could get them down. And, I might add, it was frustrating me, cause I couldn't get my mind to turn off!

I hadn't realized how it did emote the passage of time or long for the past until you said it. :kiss: *Tucks the kiss gently into the rose... and puts the rose into the vase on her desk*
 
babydoll2u said:
lol.. he told me that he doesn't normally title his work... altho he did title one for me when I asked him to. I'm sure he won't mind ;)


*smiles* I truly hope he doesn't mind... for I shall be in the doghouse with him, if he does... not! :D

I'll take that chance tho.
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
*smiles* I truly hope he doesn't mind... for I shall be in the doghouse with him, if he does... not! :D

I'll take that chance tho.

LOL... naw, it'd have to be pretty bad to get in the "doghouse' with MrF ;)
 
MrFantasyMan said:
Thank you Victoria... :rose:
the title is fine (guess I should give my works titles?)...hehehe
it happens to be breakfast today... :rolleyes:


Don't you think your works deserve titles? If I don't have a title for a work when I first sit down to write... and this includes my stories... I find a title from within the words. Crumbcake and Coffee just stood out... maybe because it was repeated... or, maybe because it was what everthing was 'compared' with.

It's breakfast? May I come and join you? I love crumbcake, still warm and fresh from the oven... the soft texture of the cake as it melts when you place it on your tongue... And I love getting the sticky crumbs off my fingers! :D But to share that, with a good friend, over hot coffee and talk? *tsk* NOTHING beats that... and I do mean NOTHING! :kiss:
 
babydoll2u said:
LOL... naw, it'd have to be pretty bad to get in the "doghouse' with MrF ;)


doghouse???...the only one in a doghouse would be me... :D
*barks at the mailman*...woof, woof!...
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
Don't you think your works deserve titles? If I don't have a title for a work when I first sit down to write... and this includes my stories... I find a title from within the words. Crumbcake and Coffee just stood out... maybe because it was repeated... or, maybe because it was what everthing was 'compared' with.

It's breakfast? May I come and join you? I love crumbcake, still warm and fresh from the oven... the soft texture of the cake as it melts when you place it on your tongue... And I love getting the sticky crumbs off my fingers! :D But to share that, with a good friend, over hot coffee and talk? *tsk* NOTHING beats that... and I do mean NOTHING! :kiss:


Actually as Babydoll has already stated I don't usually title my works...poetry, to me, means different things to different people and a title seems to put it into a category...just part of my style perhaps... :rolleyes: ...I do wish I had company for breakfast sometimes..hmmmmmmmm...and a real bakery to get the crumbcake from... :cool:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
Actually as Babydoll has already stated I don't usually title my works...poetry, to me, means different things to different people and a title seems to put it into a category...just part of my style perhaps... :rolleyes: ...I do wish I had company for breakfast sometimes..hmmmmmmmm...and a real bakery to get the crumbcake from... :cool:
LOL.. bet you'd rather have my homemade crumbcake... ;) :kiss:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
doghouse???...the only one in a doghouse would be me... :D
*barks at the mailman*...woof, woof!...

LMAO.... never... you're too loveable.. :kiss:
 
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