Victoria_2001_02769
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WyldBreeze said:Just another humble attempt....the poem doesn't have to mean something to everyone....just everything to someone.
The Five Senses
by WyldBreeze
I can see the stars shining, even in the middle of blue skies.
I can gaze across the valley and look upon the heights of the greatest mountains.
I can close my eyes and see inside your beautiful soul.
In a darkened room, I can view my dreams in living color.
I can taste eternity with the tip of my tongue.
I can savor the sweetness of the future with a caress of my lips.
The full array of the flavor of life surrounds my palate.
Fleeting within seconds, yet lingering on forever.
My words come in whispers, yet reveal the secrets of my soul.
The sighs escape my body as your touch satisfies it.
My voice, though speaking in volumes, still fails to relay the depths of my feelings.
I'm speechless, yet you understand me.
I hear your message, your wants and desires, though your voice says nothing.
Your teasing words....your protectiveness, hold the ghosts' voices at bay.
Listening to the timbre, the meaning of your words, the truth of your feelings,
It's the greatest melody known.
The feeling of your gaze upon me as I slumber peacefully in your arms,
The sensations evoked when your hand brushes my heated skin.
The loss of gravity when your lips touch mine,
Yes....all of this from your one tender kiss.
This is simply beautiful WB... simply beautiful. I hope it is everything to that special someone.

