Victoria_2001_02769
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biggbear8 said:Victoria Sweet Victoria![]()
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That is a beautiful story very nice writing hugs kisses
Bear


LustfulOne50 said:A Dedication to a Master Writer ...Playground Writer's Wall of Fame.
BiggBear8..You are master of words and verse.
To all the writers
Keep working on your poems and find your style, I have read alot of beautiful poems, keep working hard and try to write what is enjoyable to you and let people see your imagination.
This is a honor to announce you as the Third member of the Wall of Fame..and may many follow you.
This is BiggBear8
awaiting Image

MrFantasyMan said:*Applause*...great choice!...congradulations my friend...![]()
Victoria_2001_02769 said:For the Wall, Lusty![]()
LustfulOne50 said:Thanks Victoria for the Image....another good pick ...yeppy
Victoria_2001_02769 said:I couldn't agree with you more on the pick for this month... or on the one for next. And yes, I've captured that image already. Just remind me at the end of this month, to post it to you... k?![]()
Erotica_Writings said:A rose carries her tears on her shoulders,
Allowing the hurt and pain to lie and smolder.
Her petals so soft and tender,
Yet he did not defend her.
Stabbed by his powerful words like a knife,
She staggers wounded into the night.
She is losing and becoming weak under the dark sky,
Her eyes no longer sparkle and she takes with her the deadly lie.
They find her lifeless body on the side of the road,
In her hand is a beautiful dew covered rose.
By Erotica Writings
COPYRIGHT (C) 2005

Victoria_2001_02769 said:Such powerful images, EW... and how true that the rose carries her tears (dew drops) on her shoulders (petals). This work speaks to me of love gone awry... and the blows struck by words spoken in anger or hurt.... or even spoken as a lie.
Lord help me... how true your words are... and bring back words that were recently spoken to me... which turned out to be lies.
Beautiful, my sweeter sis... just beautiful.![]()

Erotica_Writings said:A rose carries her tears on her shoulders,
Allowing the hurt and pain to lie and smolder.
Her petals so soft and tender,
Yet he did not defend her.
Stabbed by his powerful words like a knife,
She staggers wounded into the night.
She is losing and becoming weak under the dark sky,
Her eyes no longer sparkle and she takes with her the deadly lie.
They find her lifeless body on the side of the road,
In her hand is a beautiful dew covered rose.
By Erotica Writings
COPYRIGHT (C) 2005
LustfulOne50 said:Nice poem EW...haunting for me..I did a short story call The Treat..that a special rose in it...basicly a very sexy ghost who left a special gift a dried rose

MrFantasyMan said:The look in your eyes,
The shape of your lips,
The softness of your breasts,
The grinding of your hips,
The smell of sweat,
The taste of skin,
Love-making this passionate,
Has to be a sin,
Passionate dreams,
Have finally come true,
The dreams of pleasure, happiness,
And just being with you,
A passionate moan,
A sensual kiss,
I never would have thought,
That I could make love like this,
Nails scratching my back,
Rough yet pleasing,
Staring into your eyes,
Enticing, teasing
Your teeth bite my neck,
Then nibble on my ear,
Just a few signs,
That the climax is near,
Faster and harder,
I feel alive!
And then collapsing,
When we finally arrive,
Talk for a while,
About how our love will never fade,
Then sit and think,
About the love we just made,
I lean in to kiss you,
A kiss so sweet,
Sends shivers up my spine,
Then back down to my feet,
A kiss so loving,
A kiss so sublime,
A kiss so passionate,
We make love one more time.
MFM![]()
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Victoria_2001_02769 said:Another beautiful piece, MFM. Your words, and the images they engender... leave me wanting. What I'd give to know a love this strong, this sweet, and this tender and all emcompassing.![]()
MrFantasyMan said:Thank you Victoria...![]()
I do believe that everyone has the ability to express what they feel...and for some reason choose not too......maybe the fear of rejection, I just don't know. It seems my emotions or feelings come from an inner well that I wish I could tap whenever I wanted. That not being the case I write them pretty much as I have them and sort them out later...
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