babydoll2u
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MrFantasyMan said:so touching Peg...![]()
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...and to think you told me you couldn't write...
...so full of emotion and passion...I do hope you post more
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you bring it out in me...

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MrFantasyMan said:so touching Peg...![]()
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...and to think you told me you couldn't write...
...so full of emotion and passion...I do hope you post more
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babydoll2u said:you bring it out in me...![]()
...and I am SORRY I haven't responded to each of your posts here...I will attempt to be more dillegent... 
MrFantasyMan said:Aw shucks......I am but a single flower in the garden...
...and I am SORRY I haven't responded to each of your posts here...I will attempt to be more dillegent...
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babydoll2u said:It's ok sweetie, lol *blushing*... you're a busy man, that I know...![]()
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malcah_ms said:Path to my Pussy
by malcah_ms ©
Moist butterfly kisses
cascade down my belly,
as your hot breath
marks a path to my pussy,
my fingers
crumpling the sheets.
Your flattened tongue
flicks back and forth on
my swollen pink lips
soaked with pussy juice
from your
expert fingers
exploring me.
Your tongue darts
slides
all over my clit
as your lips
hungrily suck
and pull
up on my swollen
blood-filled clit.
Skilled fingers
feathery tongue
glide in and out of
my hot juicy love box,
tasting me,
drinking me,
the juices flowing
down like a waterfall
beyond my
brown rosebud
resting on
the crisp
linen sheets.

babydoll2u said:The memory of
the light in your eyes as you gaze into mine
your lips upon my lips
your tongue tasting my tongue
your fingers tracing my skin
my name upon your whisper
Causes
my eyes to tear
my heart to race
my breath to catch
my soul to hope
my body to yearn
More than almost anything
I want you
I desire you
I need you
I love you

babydoll2u said:The memory of
the light in your eyes as you gaze into mine
your lips upon my lips
your tongue tasting my tongue
your fingers tracing my skin
my name upon your whisper
Causes
my eyes to tear
my heart to race
my breath to catch
my soul to hope
my body to yearn
More than almost anything
I want you
I desire you
I need you
I love you


Victoria_2001_02769 said:Lest I forget, or get side-tracked, as I am trying to get caught up on my comments, yet again.... let me say:
BabyDoll?
I sincerely hope that you never tell another soul that "I can't write." Because this example belies those words. I truly hope you will put other works up if you have them... or create them if you don't. This is lovely... elegant yet simple... clearly stating the obvious... the love for your man.![]()

babydoll2u said:I was reading back through the Corner and realized that I had missed these... it was the day I was offline most of the day... please forgive, my love.
This is so beautiful, but then all of your writings are, to me.
A call to join the writer, to embrace the words of the heart, to write a lifelong love story.... a more precious invitation could not be extended.
"Let us write our own love story"... an invitation from the heart.. one I woul d gladly accept, from you...![]()
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...this is one of my favorites...didn't feel like an invitation when it was written...but so many of these write themselves. Lovers everywhere know this feeling...it's a universal as Love itself... 
babydoll2u said:whoa.... I love this... this is different from all of your other writings... weaving instruments, melody, beats, the ocean... into the feelings in our hearts... How you can do this I do not know... but writings like this, serve as little reminders of why I love you.
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...probably the result of having been at a concert this weekend...Kansas...at the waterfront park...stars in the sky...

MrFantasyMan said:Listen closely and you will hear
a sound so soft and sweet...
distant rhythms call to me
a gentle dancing beat...
a melody that wanders
dancing through the air...
and when my ears can hear it
I know that you are there...
love sings softly to me
I cherish every word...
tingling from within me
the sweetest sounds I've heard...
I am lost in all the silence
whenever you're not there...
so I hold on to you and
all the love we share...
A gentle wind is passing
a soft and subtle breeze...
but the song that it carries
will bring you to your knees...
a symphony embraces me
feeling each and every note...
for the precious love you have given
and the heart that I must tote...
Love sings softly to me
it carries me away...
touching and caressing me
each and every day...
the melody is sweetest
when I have you close to me...
the sound of two hearts beating
in loving harmony...
MFM
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MrFantasyMan said:...probably the result of having been at a concert this weekend...Kansas...at the waterfront park...stars in the sky...
...and this LOVE in my heart...
...nothing little about that reminder...
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MrFantasyMan said:Listen closely and you will hear
a sound so soft and sweet...
distant rhythms call to me
a gentle dancing beat...
a melody that wanders
dancing through the air...
and when my ears can hear it
I know that you are there...
love sings softly to me
I cherish every word...
tingling from within me
the sweetest sounds I've heard...
I am lost in all the silence
whenever you're not there...
so I hold on to you and
all the love we share...
A gentle wind is passing
a soft and subtle breeze...
but the song that it carries
will bring you to your knees...
a symphony embraces me
feeling each and every note...
for the precious love you have given
and the heart that I must tote...
Love sings softly to me
it carries me away...
touching and caressing me
each and every day...
the melody is sweetest
when I have you close to me...
the sound of two hearts beating
in loving harmony...
MFM
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LustfulOne50 said:Nice one malcah_ms very hot and so descriptive ..what a beautiful vision in the mind...keep it up there Lady....![]()
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MrFantasyMan said:*applause*...this is so descriptive and erotic...your words paint a picture I can easily see......so expressive...love your work...
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malcah_ms said:Path to my Pussy
by malcah_ms ©
Moist butterfly kisses
cascade down my belly,
as your hot breath
marks a path to my pussy,
my fingers
crumpling the sheets.
Your flattened tongue
flicks back and forth on
my swollen pink lips
soaked with pussy juice
from your
expert fingers
exploring me.
Your tongue darts
slides
all over my clit
as your lips
hungrily suck
and pull
up on my swollen
blood-filled clit.
Skilled fingers
feathery tongue
glide in and out of
my hot juicy love box,
tasting me,
drinking me,
the juices flowing
down like a waterfall
beyond my
brown rosebud
resting on
the crisp
linen sheets.

catsr2wild said:Well Lady Victoria and Lusty...I'm here finally and I must say I am quite impressed......I have only read a few things but I have enjoyed what I read....yes Victoria you were right......![]()
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x 4 (2 for each) *Tucks the kisses in among the roses, and places the roses within the vase that sits on her desk*biggbear8 said:Im taking it very easy in this heat we are having and the treatments are going well. Victoria my sweet beautiful lady there is nothing to be sorry about Ill whisper into the wind again in hope of finding you in the garden with me I understand how r/l gets overwhelming sometimes. please take care {{{{{{{{Victoria }}}}}}}}}} have a beautiful day![]()
*brings up one red rose, softly kisses the inner petals, then hands it to you, whispering,* "This perfect red rose does not compare to the beauty of your wonderful soul and caring heart." *then I lean over and take your hand giving it a soft kiss. such beauty resides in your beautiful soul.*![]()
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babydoll2u said:Things Left Unsaid
so many things left unsaid
so many thoughts rolling around in my head
My heart is hurting for a friend
who may think I do not want to make amends
I assure you, quite the opposite is true
But how can I get my message through?
Let's dispense with this animosity
and make things right between you and me
Please, listen to me, listen to my heart...
and as you requested, let's make a new start
You know who you are...
Keep writing.Victoria_2001_02769 said:Very lovely Peg!It's nice to see you posting another new work. I'm sure your message has been, or will be, received.
Keep writing.