Loving wives...

[starrkers]

Seeing as I've entered the Survivor contest this year (looks like fun in a masochistic kind of way), I thought I'd get a Loving Wives submission out of the way.
"The Best Game" has been up for four days and so far has only been attacked because I can't spell (I use English spellings, not American) and for being too short. I'm a bit disappointed that I haven't managed to really piss someone off
The votes are killing it slowly, but I didn't really expect anything else.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Seeing as I've entered the Survivor contest this year (looks like fun in a masochistic kind of way), I thought I'd get a Loving Wives submission out of the way.
"The Best Game" has been up for four days and so far has only been attacked because I can't spell (I use English spellings, not American) and for being too short. I'm a bit disappointed that I haven't managed to really piss someone off
The votes are killing it slowly, but I didn't really expect anything else.

Don't worry about your being short, Starrkers. Many great writers have been vertically challenged, I suppose.

Comment-wise, if it'll make you feel better, I'll be glad to leave a typically abusive, vitriolic Loving Wives comment. Of course, that would mean I couldn't read the story. But what are friends for?

Rumple Foreskin

 

[starrkers]

Why, thank yee, Rumple.

As to being vertically challenged, I figure it's better than having my head in the clouds.

 

[Vermilion]

Hi Starkers - I'm English too and stick to what I know - ie: English spellings.
Ignore those eejits, English is a differeng language from American and there's no reason why we should change it.
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[starrkers]

I laughed at the "idiot Brits" comment. I'm Australian for a start and the idiot Yank couldn't spell his own version of the language!

 

[Vermilion]

As I understand it, trolls rarely can. That's why it's so damn funny when they criticise authors.
And I'm sorry <has possibly fatal attack of pompous Imperialism> isn't Australia like a very far away outpost of England anyway?
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[starrkers]

ROFL - depends on how you view cricket!

Hey, we're a multicultural society now - we have our own race riots

 

[Vermilion]

Cricket ? That's a small insect that creates a noise by rubbing its back legs together, right?
<is sooooooo not interested in international sports unless it's rugby, in which case she'll admire the bottoms and the hunky, mud-smeared men>

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[RonClarkeson]

I better sbmit my loving wives tale toot suit!

Seeing as I've entered the Survivor contest this year (looks like fun in a masochistic kind of way), I thought I'd get a Loving Wives submission out of the way.
"The Best Game" has been up for four days and so far has only been attacked because I can't spell (I use English spellings, not American) and for being too short. I'm a bit disappointed that I haven't managed to really piss someone off
The votes are killing it slowly, but I didn't really expect anything else.

It kills me that people do not vote, how do you get them to?

 

[Vermilion]

It kills me that people do not vote, how do you get them to?

Pray.

 

[RonClarkeson]

yeah If you believe that then...

Pray.

Yes I supose we have to really be out there, way out there to get a vote and even further out there to get them to submit feedback.

I am going to start typing NOW!

 

[Boxlicker101]

It kills me that people do not vote, how do you get them to?

You ask them to. At the end of the story, suggest that you appreciate having readers express their opinion by voting and feedback, either email or PC. Don't beg; just expression appreciation in advance. On my older stories, where that paragraph does not appear, I get few votes and no feedback. On the stories where it does appear, I get more of both, but not as much as I would like.

This is an example:
Thank you for reading this story. I hope you had as much fun as Angelica and I did. I like writing stories on Literotica, but I like it a lot more when I know that people are reading and enjoying them, and I appreciate it when readers take the time to express their opinions by voting. Like most authors on Literotica, I practically live for feedback from readers, either public comments or email to me. Such feedback, whether praise or criticism, helps me to write more and better stories, and I respond to it whenever I can.

 

[CharleyH]

What would you authors say was a good example of a loving wife category story?

Literally just a sex scene between man and wife or something more power play?

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I thought a loving wife was just that, "LOVING" when I first came across this niche on Lit. I was SO WRONG! I think this is a bit of a confused category and it's not one writers enjoy or that readers agree on.

Lit defines the category as basically a woman who has so much love to give that she can't restrict herself ... I think it is a nympho category

 

[Boxlicker101]

I thought a loving wife was just that, "LOVING" when I first came across this niche on Lit. I was SO WRONG! I think this is a bit of a confused category and it's not one writers enjoy or that readers agree on.

Lit defines the category as basically a woman who has so much love to give that she can't restrict herself ... I think it is a nympho category

That definition is pretty bogus. Usually it's about a woman who is cheating on her husband OR about a woman who is fucking other men or women because he likes to watch. Sometimes the cheating is for good rerason, such as a husband who is unfaithful or who is cold and is withholding sex from her. "Annie's Neglected Pussy" is a good example of the latter.

There is no one catchall definition, except to say that it is about a woman who has sex with somebody other than her husband, but not as part of swinging.

 

[starrkers]

That's probably where mine went wrong - it's about a bloke who travels around seducing wives. He's loving wives

 

[RonClarkeson]

My story just submited.

That's probably where mine went wrong - it's about a bloke who travels around seducing wives. He's loving wives

I think I got the definition diferently a wife who gives herself and/or her husband an erotic experience out of the norm.

 

[Boxlicker101]

I think I got the definition diferently a wife who gives herself and/or her husband an erotic experience out of the norm.

It could be that, if the experience is having him watch while she does somebody else.