Loving Wives Category

[SusanSeeker]

I'm sure this subject has been discussed to death, so I'm sorry to raise it again.

I have recently posted a couple of stories in the Loving Wife category.

Now I don't mind getting a bit of negative feedback, that's fine by me. Most feedback seems to be about whether the story is posted in the correct category.

Now I know that slut wife stories aren't everybody's cup of tea but the idea of posting to the Fetish section doesn't seem right. Surely it is time that a new category or two is introduced. You only have to look at the number of stories in the Loving Wife category to see that it is one of the most 'popular'.

I also believe that there are huge differences between threesome, slut wife, cuckold, swinging, etc.

I just want feedback on the story - not a debate about whether it is a cuck story or not.

By the way, there was enough feedback on my last story for me to work out that it was pretty terrible.

 

[nakdsub]

It's a pretty tough category, that's for sure...

I'm not really sure what the original purpose of the category was supposed to be. Most of my stories have the husband suspecting infidelity but not finding out for sure until later in the story. Because of this, there are always the trolls who call him a cuckold simply because he didn't confront the wife and chuck her to the curb at the first thought, even though he had no proof.

I have to tell you, I do believe a, "cuckold" story should be in fetish, or at the very least, you should warn the reader in a prologue that it is a cuckold story. I very, very seldom give out 1 stars, but I will if I waste my time reading 90% of a story just to find out in the end that it is a cuckold.

 

[nakdsub]

I read the story and have a couple of suggestions...

First, you tell it in 3rd person but in present tense. For me anyway, that's a killer. They just don't fit, if it's in 3rd it should be past tense.
Second, there was no emotions expressed. It was extremely bland. You need to get people involved.
As far as it being a cuck story. No it was not, but again, there was no emotion expressed by the hubby other than saying he can do his own cleaning.

 

[sr71plt]

Sorry, but you're right, this has been discussed to death on the forum. And the response in that category doesn't change or get reasoned away. It is what it is--because of where it was placed. Now you know, and it's probably best just to take note of that and move on rather than spend a lot of time trying to rationalize it away.