Lost my cherry... feedback?

[CNYWriter]

Well I finally caved, wrote a story and sent it in. It seems that a lot of people are at least looking at it and the score is good (tho I don't know what a good score is) so I guess I was looking for some constructive feedback as it was my 1st (sniff lol)

Seeing as how I'm going out in a few minutes hopefully I'll have some feedback to read when I stumble home.

Thanks in advance for any comments.

 

[MathGirl]

Voting

Any average score above 5.0 should be considered encouraging.
MG

 

[TheEarl]

Now now MG. What is it with you and teasing the newbies?

Anything above a 4.0 is good. 4.5 and above is excellent.

The Earl

 

[Pookie]

Have you tried asking for feedback in the "Story Feedback" forum? There are some very helpful people there that will give you some great advice and feedback. Go in there with a thick skin though. But don't let that scare you either. The critiques you will get will help you become a better writer, which is the goal of all of us.


Pookie

 

[MathGirl]

Re: Lost my cherry

Hey, CNYW: I found it here under the couch.

Earl,
I have my standards, you have yours.
MG

 

[CNYWriter]

HA lord knows I shouldn't drink and post, I forgot to link the story in my original post lol....

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=88948

 

[karmadog]

HA lord knows I shouldn't drink and post, I forgot to link the story in my original post lol....

Christ, would I be quiet if that were a rule.