Looking for Lesbian Romance story editor!

[MorLesMom]

I have written my first story about a girl in love with a religious girl. And the events that lead to the religious girl giving in to her emotions.

I wrote it in 3rd person as an attempt to be able to loon into everyone's thoughts. If that not recommended il write in 1st next time.
But I'm having problems getting it published due to "Formatting"?

If someone is willing to edit I'd be very appreciative!

 

[CiaoSteve]

How long is it? If not massive, then I'd be happy to take a look.

 

[MorLesMom]

How long is it? If not massive, then I'd be happy to take a look.

It's around 9900 words. Is that too long?

 

[CiaoSteve]

Thanks. I see you also have a reply from @AwkwardlySet . Whilst I am happy to take a look, I will leave you in AwkwardlySet's capable hands if you have already sent the story.