Looking for feedback

[Christl]

Working on 'Part Two' of 'The Start of Something' and looking for feedback on what direction to take.....

It's in NonConsent----> The Start of Something

comments (good, bad and ugly) are appreciated

 

[Debbie]

A link to your first story


http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=19575


I'll read it and get back to you!