Looking for Critique Partners

[Donick]

I would appreciate constructive criticism/praise of my work, and I would be willing to exchange the same feedback. If you are interested in having a critique relationship please email me, or send me feedback via my stories. Or feel free to post a link to your stories in this thread.


Sincerely,

Donick
donick@literotica.org

 

[the_bragis]

It's a shocker!!

Hello Donick,

I have just finished reading ‘Cock Fight’.

Fuck! (Can I say that in here?) But that’s exactly what I thought after I read it. It’s raw and shocking. I shuddered many times as a visualised those images you painted in my head, but I couldn’t stop until I got to the end. It’s good, very good.

I found Serga a little confusing as a character, that in such a time, that kind of man could be so caring. Maybe from your (Diego’s) point of view you (he) craved the caring of his mother, and wanted to see that? At any rate he did give your story a slightly gentle side to balance it, which is nice for female readers like me.

This story is not going to appeal to everyone; certainly it's not for the faint hearted. Gorean fans are going to love it! John Norman himself could have written this one.

It’s interesting too, the ancient Romans apparently often went into battle naked but for metal collars around their necks, and with full erections. (Damn it, I get hot thinking about that.)

Well have a great day,
Alex (fem)