Looking for Beta Reader feedback for a 15k story: Erotic coupling of Lusty Spontaneous Romance between Teacher and senior student

Jmanchu

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Story stars a female math teacher who's enthusiastic about teaching and her severely sexually frustrated high school(senior) student who's got a huge crush on her. Student deals with said sexual frustration issues because of the sexual tension from dealing with her. Female teacher secretly crushes on him back but tries always to keep it professional. He ends up after school with her to serve detention she gives him. Teacher tries to help him because she's worried about his performance in school and, as a good teacher that sees potential, tries to help him and tries to see if she could use the 1 on 1 time in the detention to help. There's sexual tension between them, and things get out of hand at the end.
Sex in story is highly detailed. Probably overly so, about 6k or 40% of the word count is sex(including the foreplay) so be warned.

Dunno if it's erotic coupling or romance. I personally feel like it's Erotic Coupling.

EDIT: By Feedback, I mean Beta Reader feedback. Edited for clarification.
 
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Happy to comment/ feedback for you if you want to pm me. From the outline above I think Erotic coupling seems more appropriate.
 
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