Looking for an experienced author to proof read and help piece together a whole story start to finish.

[smokingtabz1991]

I’ve recently started posting my work after debating it for a long time.. the feedback for the most part is positive but I have trouble piecing everything together.. I have numerous stories drafted up that I have not posted yet.

Anybody interested in incest/smoking/mom/son fetish category and wants to give me some feedback feel free to message me or comment. Thanks!

 

[sumptuouscove]

I can try if you help me with mine.

 

[RoperTrace]

I’ve recently started posting my work after debating it for a long time.. the feedback for the most part is positive but I have trouble piecing everything together.. I have numerous stories drafted up that I have not posted yet.

Anybody interested in incest/smoking/mom/son fetish category and wants to give me some feedback feel free to message me or comment. Thanks!

I'd be willing to give some feedback, if you're still looking.