Looking for an editor - incest

[flawed_ethics]

Rusty old writer returning after a small lifetime. I've (finally) gotten back into the swing of things and have written a short piece of smut that could use some lighthearted proofreading and feedback. The subject is Incest (mom/son/daughter, but not exactly mff). My writing style is intentionally verb-tense incorrect. Not in a deliberate/jarring sense. Just how it rolls of my mind. I have worked with volunteer proofreaders in the past and have found making corrections strips the voice of the story. So anyone brave enough to offer their time to review my work would have to endure. As a silver lining, you're not being asked to correct said errors.

As always, thanks in advance for your time!

 

[Tommigirl0512]

Hello Flawsed Ethics,

I will venture in on this subject. If you are still interested in input, write back asap. I'll be open and honest with you. Promise.

Tommi

 

[Greyarea2234]

Rusty old writer returning after a small lifetime. I've (finally) gotten back into the swing of things and have written a short piece of smut that could use some lighthearted proofreading and feedback. The subject is Incest (mom/son/daughter, but not exactly mff). My writing style is intentionally verb-tense incorrect. Not in a deliberate/jarring sense. Just how it rolls of my mind. I have worked with volunteer proofreaders in the past and have found making corrections strips the voice of the story. So anyone brave enough to offer their time to review my work would have to endure. As a silver lining, you're not being asked to correct said errors.

As always, thanks in advance for your time!

I would also be honored for a chance for a look at your work. Not much of an editor but I could provide honest and detailed opinion on the story.

 

[Tommigirl0512]

Hi, I have not yet published anything, but can easily provide life experiences. I grew up in a nudist household with three brothers.

If you wish to hear more, respond asap.
Tommi

 

[Greyarea2234]

Hi, I have not yet published anything, but can easily provide life experiences. I grew up in a nudist household with three brothers.

If you wish to hear more, respond asap.
Tommi

Well I for one would love to here more Tommigirl here or in pms.