Looking for an editor

[astuffedshirt_perv]

I have finished a story and would like someone to edit it. This one is a Toys and Masturbation story. A woman receives a very sophisticated sex toy from a friend. After losing the instruction manual, she has several positive experiences with it and then makes a mistake with the settings. She gets stuck in a tease and denial routine. 7000 words or so.

Anyone interested? I am primarily looking for a new set of eyes on it, and am eager for any suggestions also.

 

[PennLady]

Okay, I'm sorry, but my first question is if she's being denied by the toy... what's to stop her from finishing herself off?

Anyway. Sorry. I do things like that.

 

[LustKnight]

Okay, I'm sorry, but my first question is if she's being denied by the toy... what's to stop her from finishing herself off?

Anyway. Sorry. I do things like that.

...it's a "very sophisticated" toy.

 

[PennLady]

...it's a "very sophisticated" toy.

I don't think I want one that sophisticated.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

You are correct, LustKnight! Conceptually, she accidentally locks the toy on and it serves as a chastity belt. My planned title is "RTFM" (for Read The F*** Manual)