Hoping to find an editor to work with
Hello everyone.
I write under the name, Fuiva. I have a few poems and a short story (30k +- words) that I've been working on (nearly finished). I love writing, but I'm finding that I'm in need of an editor as I have no one else to proofread and catch small gramatical errors.
What I would like, is someone who will take my finished work and polish it up: fix grammer, spelling, etc. While I'm always open to suggestions, what I will be submitting to you will be considered finished to the best of my abilities.
If you're interested and available, please let me know. You can see samples of my work here (I just started publishing to Lit so there's not a lot on here - they certainly take their time to publish): http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1503598&page=submissions
April 27th Edit.
I forgot to mention that I mainly write under Romantic Coupling (I believe that's what it's call on Lit) but I do dip into some bdsm stuff - I try to keep it realistic (not everyone has a dungeon in the basement). I also thought I'd add a few paragraphs from the story that I'm working on so as to give a taste of my writing style. (unpublished chapter).
[From, The Diary of Julian Bronx - Chp 4]
“This is nice,” said Carine. “Who is this we’re listening to?”
Bronx was surprised: no one ever comments on his music. “The group’s name is, Prince Innocence. The name of the song is, ‘Cheree.’” He glanced over to see that she was looking at him attentively. She really is interested. “I wasn’t sure at first, if I liked her voice – her style.”
“No – it’s good. I like the synths.”
On Carine’s skin the sun had kissed, and in her hair, the beach had made it’s home. She leaned back into the seat – shifting her knees together to her side, and her mind into neutral. “Tell me more about this band.”
The roads were light and he adjusted the volume. He watched as she closed her eyes, and then took the opportunity to steal a look of her body. Carine had forgone the beach dress as they were packing up, and now she was lying next to him - half naked – wearing only the bikini that he had worked for. Her beauty was hard to ignore, and he decided that he would work all his life – if only for more moments like this one. “I don’t know much really. I only downloaded their music a few days ago.”
“You know something, Mr. Bronx. Tell me.” Her voice was softer: sleepy.
Please PM if you're interested in working together. Again, I'm hoping for a long term relationship. I don't need it to be personal. I do plan on adding the editor's name to the work (unless directed otherwise).
Sincerely,
Fuiva
Hello everyone.
I write under the name, Fuiva. I have a few poems and a short story (30k +- words) that I've been working on (nearly finished). I love writing, but I'm finding that I'm in need of an editor as I have no one else to proofread and catch small gramatical errors.
What I would like, is someone who will take my finished work and polish it up: fix grammer, spelling, etc. While I'm always open to suggestions, what I will be submitting to you will be considered finished to the best of my abilities.
If you're interested and available, please let me know. You can see samples of my work here (I just started publishing to Lit so there's not a lot on here - they certainly take their time to publish): http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1503598&page=submissions
April 27th Edit.
I forgot to mention that I mainly write under Romantic Coupling (I believe that's what it's call on Lit) but I do dip into some bdsm stuff - I try to keep it realistic (not everyone has a dungeon in the basement). I also thought I'd add a few paragraphs from the story that I'm working on so as to give a taste of my writing style. (unpublished chapter).
[From, The Diary of Julian Bronx - Chp 4]
“This is nice,” said Carine. “Who is this we’re listening to?”
Bronx was surprised: no one ever comments on his music. “The group’s name is, Prince Innocence. The name of the song is, ‘Cheree.’” He glanced over to see that she was looking at him attentively. She really is interested. “I wasn’t sure at first, if I liked her voice – her style.”
“No – it’s good. I like the synths.”
On Carine’s skin the sun had kissed, and in her hair, the beach had made it’s home. She leaned back into the seat – shifting her knees together to her side, and her mind into neutral. “Tell me more about this band.”
The roads were light and he adjusted the volume. He watched as she closed her eyes, and then took the opportunity to steal a look of her body. Carine had forgone the beach dress as they were packing up, and now she was lying next to him - half naked – wearing only the bikini that he had worked for. Her beauty was hard to ignore, and he decided that he would work all his life – if only for more moments like this one. “I don’t know much really. I only downloaded their music a few days ago.”
“You know something, Mr. Bronx. Tell me.” Her voice was softer: sleepy.
Please PM if you're interested in working together. Again, I'm hoping for a long term relationship. I don't need it to be personal. I do plan on adding the editor's name to the work (unless directed otherwise).
Sincerely,
Fuiva
Last edited:
