Goey
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Apr 17, 2012
- Posts
- 384
I'm looking for someone, not bothered what sex they are, whom I can email my stories to to get feedback before posting them. I often do stupid things like switch tenses etc so this would really help.
Not to mention with longer stories it would be nice to get some feedback on how it flows etc to prevent it from being boring or me using the same words over and over again (I think I used the word cock 5 times in one sentence once).
Shoot me a PM if interested.
Not to mention with longer stories it would be nice to get some feedback on how it flows etc to prevent it from being boring or me using the same words over and over again (I think I used the word cock 5 times in one sentence once).
Shoot me a PM if interested.
