ForeskinFan
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- Mar 17, 2022
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Hey all!
I’m looking for help editing a sequel to my first story, Hot Tub With My Wife’s Best friend. The first story focused on a sexual interlude with his wife’s friend during a night of hot tubbing, and this one starts off the next day after the wife left to do some shopping. The story includes cheating, anal play, rimming, and a strong focus on the uncircumcised member.
Currently I’m writing on an ipad as the only laptop I have is for work. This presents some challenges with google docs for formatting, and that checked out with the feedback from story one receding 4.49 stars (just missed that most popular tag!) I can share the doc in whatever format you like, but would be super grateful for someone to help clean this up, add suggestions, and help me continue to develop as a writer.
Thanks!
I’m looking for help editing a sequel to my first story, Hot Tub With My Wife’s Best friend. The first story focused on a sexual interlude with his wife’s friend during a night of hot tubbing, and this one starts off the next day after the wife left to do some shopping. The story includes cheating, anal play, rimming, and a strong focus on the uncircumcised member.
Currently I’m writing on an ipad as the only laptop I have is for work. This presents some challenges with google docs for formatting, and that checked out with the feedback from story one receding 4.49 stars (just missed that most popular tag!) I can share the doc in whatever format you like, but would be super grateful for someone to help clean this up, add suggestions, and help me continue to develop as a writer.
Thanks!
