Looking for an editor (gangbang story) for my first work

[Sultry23]

I'm new to writing, and I know I'm not any good but I have a hard time understanding what I can do better. I'm at a lost on how to add more description and make it "flow" better.

Edit: it's 1,300 words. I know, it's too short

 

[VerbalAbuse]

read similar stories and see how they do it.

 

[StillStunned]

I'm new to writing, and I know I'm not any good but I have a hard time understanding what I can do better. I'm at a lost on how to add more description and make it "flow" better.

Edit: it's 1,300 words. I know, it's too short

Besides the 750-word minimum for publishing here on Lit, there are no hard and fast rules about story length. How about this for short?

"Oh god," she breathed. It was over.