Looking for an editor for the final chapter of an incest story

[Meadowshadow]

Hey there,

Just looking for an editor and guidance for chapter 4 of Home for the Summer.

Chapter 3 took a slightly different turn and wasn't as well received as chapters 1 and 2.

I focus a lot more on sex than I do with story in this series but decided to include a bit of a cliffhanger in chapter 3.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5020245&page=submissions

 

[ElmerStudd]

Still need an editor?

I'll take a look at it if you do.