electropathetic
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- Apr 13, 2010
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This is the first erotica I have ever written. I warn you, my story is quite dirty! It is heavily focused on humiliation!
I am not turned on by urine, but the idea of being humiliated in a similar way as what happens in my story is a huge fantasy of mine!
I'm trying to emphasize that the focus here isn't pee, it's the sexual humiliation of the main character.
The first chapter of my story is only 1424 words long, and I would love an editor to check it out and honestly tell me if I'm wasting my time writing or not.
The category of this story is mind-control, and the tags would be: MC, Fm, humil, ws
I have a lot of really hot ideas (to me at least) and I'm just looking for a little help touching up my story and somebody to tell me my story isn't trash.
Anyone willing to lend me a hand?
I am not turned on by urine, but the idea of being humiliated in a similar way as what happens in my story is a huge fantasy of mine!
I'm trying to emphasize that the focus here isn't pee, it's the sexual humiliation of the main character.
The first chapter of my story is only 1424 words long, and I would love an editor to check it out and honestly tell me if I'm wasting my time writing or not.
The category of this story is mind-control, and the tags would be: MC, Fm, humil, ws
I have a lot of really hot ideas (to me at least) and I'm just looking for a little help touching up my story and somebody to tell me my story isn't trash.
Anyone willing to lend me a hand?
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