Hiya
At the moment, I'm writing a challenge story for this:
http://samhainpublishing.com/submissions#bind
I am writing a story about a pyshic vampire (sort of) who has fallen in love with a human and wnats to be mortal. The onyl way he can do that is by taking the girl's essence through orgasm and she has to fall in love with him. He enters her dreams and fulfils her sexual desires in bondage but as he takes her pleasures/orgasms, he also drains her making her weak. In the end, he has to make a choice. It ends happily.
There is consensual sex and a lot of bondage (consensual of course!) and a happy ending. No rape or anything nasty at all, I promise.
It'll be between 20,000-25,000 words and the deadline for the submission is the 15th April and I hope to finish the first draft by next weekend.
What I need from an editor is the following:
Someone who understands the difference between UK English and US English. This story is in UK English and I want it no other way
Mainly for UK spelling
Grammar
Sentence structure
flow of scene
Is the story any good?
CC is encouraged
You see I am dyspraxic and whilst I have the scene, it;s very hard for me to get what I want on paper and I will alsoa ccidentally misout words when I'm typing or put in the wrong (but correctly spelt word) in its place so I need someone with a hawk eye
Anyone interested?
Helen
xxxxx
At the moment, I'm writing a challenge story for this:
http://samhainpublishing.com/submissions#bind
I am writing a story about a pyshic vampire (sort of) who has fallen in love with a human and wnats to be mortal. The onyl way he can do that is by taking the girl's essence through orgasm and she has to fall in love with him. He enters her dreams and fulfils her sexual desires in bondage but as he takes her pleasures/orgasms, he also drains her making her weak. In the end, he has to make a choice. It ends happily.
There is consensual sex and a lot of bondage (consensual of course!) and a happy ending. No rape or anything nasty at all, I promise.
It'll be between 20,000-25,000 words and the deadline for the submission is the 15th April and I hope to finish the first draft by next weekend.
What I need from an editor is the following:
Someone who understands the difference between UK English and US English. This story is in UK English and I want it no other way
Mainly for UK spelling
Grammar
Sentence structure
flow of scene
Is the story any good?
CC is encouraged
You see I am dyspraxic and whilst I have the scene, it;s very hard for me to get what I want on paper and I will alsoa ccidentally misout words when I'm typing or put in the wrong (but correctly spelt word) in its place so I need someone with a hawk eye
Anyone interested?
Helen
xxxxx
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