Looking for an ambitious editor

[WalmartLeadership]

Long time lurker, first time poster.

Some background:

My partner encouraged me to write a story for her last year and it ended up being expanded to a few chapters. I've been a lurker here for a while and I'm confident my writing is alright, but it never hurts to have another set of eyes. My major fault is run on sentences.

Details, since the FAQ said this was encouraged:

* It's a group sex story

* Written from the first person.

* Five chapters

* 82 pages

* Roughly 33-34k words

The story is basically done. I'm just looking for any loose ends that need to be fixed. I can provide my story in Doc, PDF, or raw text by email.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Long time lurker, first time poster.

Some background:

My partner encouraged me to write a story for her last year and it ended up being expanded to a few chapters. I've been a lurker here for a while and I'm confident my writing is alright, but it never hurts to have another set of eyes. My major fault is run on sentences.

Details, since the FAQ said this was encouraged:

* It's a group sex story

* Written from the first person.

* Five chapters

* 82 pages

* Roughly 33-34k words

The story is basically done. I'm just looking for any loose ends that need to be fixed. I can provide my story in Doc, PDF, or raw text by email.

Your PM is turned off.

 

[_Lynn_]

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[WalmartLeadership]

Done.

 

[HeartlessTerror]

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[WalmartLeadership]

PM is turned on. Would you be interested in my story?