L lexiexstacy Really Experienced Joined Aug 22, 2013 Posts 108 Aug 22, 2013 #1 All of my writing is located on this blog http://jessshortstories.blogspot.com/
PennLady Literotica Guru Joined Mar 26, 2009 Posts 9,413 Aug 22, 2013 #2 As I responded to your post in Story Feedback, the feedback forum here is for feedback on stories posed to Literotica.
As I responded to your post in Story Feedback, the feedback forum here is for feedback on stories posed to Literotica.
H HeyAll Literotica Guru Joined Jun 25, 2008 Posts 5,266 Aug 23, 2013 #3 Your writing looks pretty good. The first story on your link had a lot of feeling to it. It's very good and feels realistic. Are you looking to post a full erotic story on Literotica?
Your writing looks pretty good. The first story on your link had a lot of feeling to it. It's very good and feels realistic. Are you looking to post a full erotic story on Literotica?
sr71plt Literotica Guru Joined Jul 18, 2006 Posts 51,872 Aug 23, 2013 #4 Already did, directly to the feedback board: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=918141
