I'm writing a new story set in the DC universe and I'd love if I could get a comics fan to edit it. It's going to involve Batman, Harley Quinn, Poison Ivy, and Catwoman, so lots of m/f and f/f sex. Here's my author page, take a look; http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1599338&page=submissions.
I'd like to think you wouldn't be spending much time changing 'teh' to 'the', but more giving a second opinion on characterization, comic canon, and so on. Don't think you need to have some superfan knowledge of continuity; I like to write in a nebulous pre-Nu52 timeline. Even if you just watched the cartoon, that's plenty to go on. And to cover what the story will be about, as well as a 'first draft' look at my writing style, here's a few paragraphs.
“There is no apparent cure for this sterility. Now, thankfully we were dealing with an overpopulation problem before the blast, so it will be some time before the effects of this tragedy change our way of life. But they will. All our technological sophistication is useless without people to run it. So, for that one percent of people who weren’t affected, they need to start making babies. The traditional, monogamous method of reproduction is no longer conductive to the survival of our species. Traditional marriage is no longer viable. Polygamous marriage has now been legalized by every member nation of the UN. No one wants for there to be a breeding program, or to infringe in any way on the rights of those women who are still fertile. I realize how strange this sounds, and how much it goes against people’s upbringing. Which is why so much of the Justice League, and other superhero bodies, have been leading the way in multiple marriages to demonstrate to the general public that such relationships can and must work for humanity to continue. I myself, as one of the One-Percent-Fertile, will be doing the same. I hope you all say to yourselves that if Bruce Wayne can settle down and get hitched, anyone can.”
Lois was first to ask the obvious question, interrupting the laughter before it began. “So who’s the lucky lady, Wayne?”
“Ladies. As I said, no one’s a one-woman man anymore, not if they’re fertile. Which brings me to why I really called you here today. No, much as I enjoy your company, it wasn’t just to go over what you already know.” This time, Lois let him get his laughs. “When the Eugenic Bomb went off, the Justice League and allies were fighting with the Secret Society of Supervillains within the Evilutionist’s lair. As a result, virtually no superhero or supervillain on Earth was rendered infertile. For lack of a better term, that’s breeding stock that can’t be ignored. This morning, the UN passed a resolution offering blanket immunity for past crimes to any female supervillain who agrees to a child-rearing marriage.”
The press exploded into questions, and Bruce just set his hands on the podium to wait it out. Lois simply wrote in her notepad. She wrote Holy shit.
That would cover it until she could get to her laptop and write about ten thousand words.
Again, Bruce did whatever mass hypnosis trick let him quiet down a crowd of curious reporters. In the silence, he said “I believe in justice and I believe in the law. But these are the most pressing of extenuating circumstances. Most of these women are not evil, they’ve simply made the wrong choices. To some extent or another, they’ve all paid for them. Some would say they haven’t paid enough. To that, I can only reply that I hope these women will take advantage of this opportunity to earn the second chance they’ve been given. And the women I’m marrying I believe intend to do just that. They’ve been referred to by other titles, but from now on, I’d prefer if they were known simply as Pamela and Harleen Wayne.”
I'd like to think you wouldn't be spending much time changing 'teh' to 'the', but more giving a second opinion on characterization, comic canon, and so on. Don't think you need to have some superfan knowledge of continuity; I like to write in a nebulous pre-Nu52 timeline. Even if you just watched the cartoon, that's plenty to go on. And to cover what the story will be about, as well as a 'first draft' look at my writing style, here's a few paragraphs.
“There is no apparent cure for this sterility. Now, thankfully we were dealing with an overpopulation problem before the blast, so it will be some time before the effects of this tragedy change our way of life. But they will. All our technological sophistication is useless without people to run it. So, for that one percent of people who weren’t affected, they need to start making babies. The traditional, monogamous method of reproduction is no longer conductive to the survival of our species. Traditional marriage is no longer viable. Polygamous marriage has now been legalized by every member nation of the UN. No one wants for there to be a breeding program, or to infringe in any way on the rights of those women who are still fertile. I realize how strange this sounds, and how much it goes against people’s upbringing. Which is why so much of the Justice League, and other superhero bodies, have been leading the way in multiple marriages to demonstrate to the general public that such relationships can and must work for humanity to continue. I myself, as one of the One-Percent-Fertile, will be doing the same. I hope you all say to yourselves that if Bruce Wayne can settle down and get hitched, anyone can.”
Lois was first to ask the obvious question, interrupting the laughter before it began. “So who’s the lucky lady, Wayne?”
“Ladies. As I said, no one’s a one-woman man anymore, not if they’re fertile. Which brings me to why I really called you here today. No, much as I enjoy your company, it wasn’t just to go over what you already know.” This time, Lois let him get his laughs. “When the Eugenic Bomb went off, the Justice League and allies were fighting with the Secret Society of Supervillains within the Evilutionist’s lair. As a result, virtually no superhero or supervillain on Earth was rendered infertile. For lack of a better term, that’s breeding stock that can’t be ignored. This morning, the UN passed a resolution offering blanket immunity for past crimes to any female supervillain who agrees to a child-rearing marriage.”
The press exploded into questions, and Bruce just set his hands on the podium to wait it out. Lois simply wrote in her notepad. She wrote Holy shit.
That would cover it until she could get to her laptop and write about ten thousand words.
Again, Bruce did whatever mass hypnosis trick let him quiet down a crowd of curious reporters. In the silence, he said “I believe in justice and I believe in the law. But these are the most pressing of extenuating circumstances. Most of these women are not evil, they’ve simply made the wrong choices. To some extent or another, they’ve all paid for them. Some would say they haven’t paid enough. To that, I can only reply that I hope these women will take advantage of this opportunity to earn the second chance they’ve been given. And the women I’m marrying I believe intend to do just that. They’ve been referred to by other titles, but from now on, I’d prefer if they were known simply as Pamela and Harleen Wayne.”
