lovecraft68
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Well hopefully I am requesting the right thing here. I am looking for someone to read through a BDSM project I am currently working on. I am not looking for any actual editing just someone to read through and give me some impressions.
The first chapter is on lit now
http://www.literotica.com/s/tales-of-the-circle-ch-01
If anyone wants to take a quick look at that it will give you some idea of the rest of it(although there is not sex in every chapter there is a lot of story line)
I have about 50K done and am trying to get some opinions. My problem is I created this idea and characters about three years ago. My wife and I have even role played them and I am wondering if I am letting my personal feelings for the characters affect my writing and I'm getting off track. There are some things in it I suspect are wrong, but want someone "fresh" to read it and see if they come up with the same thing.
So I am looking for someone with no bias who can read this as a story and let me know what they think both good and bad.
If you are interested either reply here or send me a PM with an e-mail address and I will send you the document.
The first chapter is on lit now
http://www.literotica.com/s/tales-of-the-circle-ch-01
If anyone wants to take a quick look at that it will give you some idea of the rest of it(although there is not sex in every chapter there is a lot of story line)
I have about 50K done and am trying to get some opinions. My problem is I created this idea and characters about three years ago. My wife and I have even role played them and I am wondering if I am letting my personal feelings for the characters affect my writing and I'm getting off track. There are some things in it I suspect are wrong, but want someone "fresh" to read it and see if they come up with the same thing.
So I am looking for someone with no bias who can read this as a story and let me know what they think both good and bad.
If you are interested either reply here or send me a PM with an e-mail address and I will send you the document.
