Hello All,
This is MJ10. After weeks of careful editing I recently completed a final draft of a 3700 word paranormal romance in the nonhuman series. There are still some issues with tenses, but I am interested in locating an editor on the boards who could serve as a fresh pair of eyes and point out any areas where I could make improvements to the story. The main issue are the pair of flashbacks/dream sequences in the middle and end. Initially I wrote them to give some idea of the heroine's background and state of mind, but after 10 revisions (10!) things have a way of going back and forth.
June is sliding into July and I am sure everyone on Lit is pretty busy with other things online and off, but if this is sort of thing interests you please feel free to PM me. Thank you for your time, and I'll look forward to your responses soon.
JW
This is MJ10. After weeks of careful editing I recently completed a final draft of a 3700 word paranormal romance in the nonhuman series. There are still some issues with tenses, but I am interested in locating an editor on the boards who could serve as a fresh pair of eyes and point out any areas where I could make improvements to the story. The main issue are the pair of flashbacks/dream sequences in the middle and end. Initially I wrote them to give some idea of the heroine's background and state of mind, but after 10 revisions (10!) things have a way of going back and forth.
June is sliding into July and I am sure everyone on Lit is pretty busy with other things online and off, but if this is sort of thing interests you please feel free to PM me. Thank you for your time, and I'll look forward to your responses soon.
JW
