lesbian sisters morality tale

[pointless]

i would like to see a story about two sisters from a broken family falling in love with each other and then slowly, but inevitably growing to hate each other because of the forbidden nature of the relationship.

i'm talking about a slow build here,. no two sisters, two sisters fuck, two sisters hate. these girls have been disconnected from each other for awhile. they have both lived together in their home with their hateful, petty, drug addled parents, but ithey have chosen seperate(yet similar) ways to cope.

one sister has turned to a more hippish, bohemian way of life. peace, love , togetherness in a shallow, distilled way. smoke pot, eat mushrooms and fuck whoevers around and pretend it's love.

the other has chosen a more blunt approach: drinking, pills, fucking just to fuck. she doesn't feel the need to pretend she's happy. she is dark and unhappy.

perhaps the story could include other people to explain how it all comes about. maybe sister 2 breaks down after a long week and sister is simply in the right place at the right time, whatever. i would just like to see a dark, pulpish morality tale full of cheap thrills and dirty sex.

i'm serious here. please have mercy on me!

 

[pointless]

hello? anybody out there? (sound of crickets in the background, footsteps make creaking sounds on the old wood floor. the wind is too loud to be real. so alone.........so very,very alone....................)

 

[Chicklet]

first off, one must have patience when making a request like this. this isn't a story idea like we generally get here "i wanna see women licking cum off of a horses ass with an eight yr old child watching her" - this is an actual in depth story, and while I know most author's on this board could handle it, most don't just pick up major ideas and take them from there.

i like the idea, but i would never commit to it. wait and see what else happens, ok?

Chicklet

 

[peterpan]

I think you have set quite a difficult problem, because you have a precise idea on the emotional tale, and it would need significant length to get the progression right.

Also, it sounds a bit of a bummer

Almost off topic:

I wonder whether there is some way to write a tale like this by listing all the sections, and then pestering people to fill in the gaps.. then editing it yourself. I often feel I could jump in and do a page to specifications easily enough, but don't have the energy for prolonged projects right now. I havent really investigated chain stories, but they don't seem to fit the bill for me.

 

[peterpan]

Sorry. Didn't mean to be repeditive. I had not refreshed the page and so did not notice Chicklets post.

 

[pointless]

okay, okay. i admit i may come off as a bit impatient, but it's just the way i get things done. i apologize for any appearence of pushiness on my part.

but a bummer? no, i don't think so. depth and darkness does imply a bit of a downer, but darkness can be quite beautiful, in real life and in fiction. it actually leaves the door open for more possibilities. stress, after all, can be a great catalyst for action and change.

i also thought of the possibility of trying to write this myself, but i know my limits. i am a guy. i haven't a fucking clue about the inner workings of an intimate, sexual relationship between women and i will not subject other people to the crap that would inevitably spew forth from my mind.

and hell the best vote of recieved on my poetry has been a 2 so far and i find poems a lot easier to write then long, involving prose. i want to write this myself, but my impatience always gets the better of me. it just is not happening.

and again, i'm sorry if i rubbed anyone the wrong way. i haven't been sleeping well of late. too many fucked up dreams that i can't explain. if i didn't have pills, i wouldn't sleep.

 

[peterpan]

A beautiful bummer then

You probably rubbed someone the wrong way. There are people that hang around Lit just WAITING to be rubbed the wrong way.

Not us though.

 

[pointless]

i thought that was the whole point of this site....

at least that's why i'm here.

bud dum bum (cimbal crash)

 

[big4life99]

Ever see the playboy twins

 

[pointless]

i just read the last thing i wrote last night and i've realized i'm a dork. there is no saving me now. i'm lost. god, please have mercy upon my wayward soul.

and the last playboy twins i remember were those fake ass barbie twins. then i discover that there were actual porno mags out there, so i stopped reading(ahem) playboy. it just couldn't compete with penthouse or club or even hustler in my mind, so unless those vacant, plastic blowup dolls are what your talking about: no, i haven't heard of them.

but i was looking more for an older/younger sister thing. twins are just too boring. it's been done to death.