Brothers Gift

[jjcubed004]

Brother and sister grew up in a pretty conservative household. Jenna is 4-5 older than Joe, she had dated guys growing up and in college, even bringing a few home to meet mom and dad. She also experimented with girls in college, after graduating and getting her first job she met Tara and they fell in love. Finally she brought her home to meet mom and dad, they were shocked and still didn’t approve of her sexual choices in partners.
But her younger brother Joe was alway supportive of Jenna and Tara. They both had good full-time jobs, owned their own house, they just needed and one more thing, a baby.
They were shocked at the cost of fertility clinics and adoptions, plus it would be from a stranger without the same DNA and genes.
That’s when they decided to ask Joe, to help them out. He agreed, he always had a little bit of a crush on his older sister.
I want the story to work up slowly, kinda awkward the first few times of Joe and Tara alone trying to conceive. They all agree Jenna should be in the room also, as they try and get pregnant.
Thinking of making it a series; adding some ideas of Joe and Jenna alone. Some time away from each other, but realizing how much they both miss having Joe around.
Thanks for reading and let me know any feedback,

 

[Small_Island]

I can definitely see this developing; but it can certainly be done more than one way. So, what is your way?
I see you don't have any stories published under this name, but that your favorites appear to include stories where the sex comes up fast and furious. Which kind of goes against the idea of, "I want the story to work up slowly..." :-D There are also comments that point to incest along the way, though it's Sister's Wife who's meant to get pregnant.
So, how do you envision the sex heat factor in your stories? When they finally get there, is it slow and loving or hot and raunchy? Do you want your stories to be stroke worthy or do you prefer a lower porn factor vs romance? Are we looking at polyamory in future or does Brother remain dildo and sperm donor?

All this to say, think about what milestones you want to hit along the way so that you keep the story on the right path rather than meandering around trying to find your way. Start wandering and you're going to lose the audience.

If you want hot sex, I might focus on Brother's attraction to Tara more than Jenna first. That way, when they pitch the baby-daddy idea to him, they can assure him that Tara likes cock enough to really be wanting to fuck him beyond just getting pregnant.

Or, if this is a slow-burn with more romance than porn, I'd still plant some sexual seeds along the way so the eventual sex is believable. Also need to make sure the conflicts between the characters, ie: the parents and Jenna, are interesting enough to hold the reader in lieu of sex.

If you find yourself getting really, really deep into your plot and character development before the action kicks in, consider a writing exercise where you just write a stroker under 5K words, picking up right from the enlistment of brother, through the first mating, which can include Sister sneaking in after Brother's first orgasm to do a hot lezzie scene with her wife to inspire Brother for round two. Having that hot core will give you a firm idea of when the build up is taking too long.

Good luck