late at night, the window is open ....

[NASCARaddicted]

Imagine: A girl is laying in her bed, the window is open. She told her boyfriend to come by late at night. She will leave the window open, so he can climb in .... her parents are strict, they wouldn't allow it. To make things worse: They don't want that the boy and the girl have any contact (similar to Romeo and Juliet).

Usually, they see each other at school. But now the girl told her boyfriend, that she is ready for her first time sex. The girl is not allowed to leave the house besides when she goes to school, so the boy has to visit her, during the night. And of course, no one may know it.

The boy is happy, because it is also his first time. But hours before this date, he runs into a problem. For some reasons, he has to cancel the date.

Since the parents don't like him, he can't call the girl. So he needs an unsuspicious messenger. Maybe his best friend, or maybe even better: the brother of the girl. He tells this guy that he has a message for the girl: He can't visit her tonight.

However, the messenger spied on the couple. He knows what they planned. So, instead of canceling the date, this guy wants to do it by himself. He puts the ladder beneath the window and climbs into the girls room. The parents are always watchful, so the girl can't turn on the light. And they can't talk. So they get undressed and have sex in the dark (without making too much noises). Then the boy leaves.

The next day in school, the boy meets the girl: "I am sorry for last night. I hope your brother explained to you why I couldn't come by" ....

 

[sirhugs]

Imagine: A girl is laying in her bed, the window is open. She told her boyfriend to come by late at night. She will leave the window open, so he can climb in .... her parents are strict, they wouldn't allow it. To make things worse: They don't want that the boy and the girl have any contact (similar to Romeo and Juliet).

Usually, they see each other at school. But now the girl told her boyfriend, that she is ready for her first time sex. The girl is not allowed to leave the house besides when she goes to school, so the boy has to visit her, during the night. And of course, no one may know it.

The boy is happy, because it is also his first time. But hours before this date, he runs into a problem. For some reasons, he has to cancel the date.

Since the parents don't like him, he can't call the girl. So he needs an unsuspicious messenger. Maybe his best friend, or maybe even better: the brother of the girl. He tells this guy that he has a message for the girl: He can't visit her tonight.

However, the messenger spied on the couple. He knows what they planned. So, instead of canceling the date, this guy wants to do it by himself. He puts the ladder beneath the window and climbs into the girls room. The parents are always watchful, so the girl can't turn on the light. And they can't talk. So they get undressed and have sex in the dark (without making too much noises). Then the boy leaves.

The next day in school, the boy meets the girl: "I am sorry for last night. I hope your brother explained to you why I couldn't come by" ....

I like the basic premise, but think using the brother angle overcomplicates it beyond realism. Forcing the incest angle into the "mistaken identity" theme may be too much. Why not the bf's brother , instead of hers?

 

[deliciously_naughty]

I would tend to agree with hugs. I think using the boyfriends brother would be best. The girl wouldn't tell what happenned b/c she's already ashamed that she would give herself before marriage, leaving the b/f's bro in the clear. You could also take it all sort of interesting ways after. For example Claire (to give her a name) might think it was an angel or a devil, making her incredibly devout afterwards. Or she might urge her b/f to come over and make love to her immediately to erase the memory, but because he's a virgin the sex sucks and she can't get her secret lover out of her head. Just two potential ways for the story to go.