sirhugs
Riding to the Rescue
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cause it is not the last minute to write for the contest.
could go several ways with this "napkin line"*:
~ the sales clerk voyeur/shopper exhibitionist.
~the store closing, clerk anxious to get to party, accepts sexual favours to unlock door (add a spouse or date , either waiting in the car, or whoring out the victim, and you've got another angle)
~ the inappropriate costume: the slut gets a nun costume; the PTA mom gets a hooker outfit; the macho football player gets that skimpy cheerleader costume made in oversize...
~ the nerdy sales clerk with no date gets invited to the party as a reward
or go a different way, not a store at all, but efforts to patch together something at home turn erotic - either incestuously or "just friends" become more (group/swap/same sex?)
* in Hollywood, they say that "high concept" movies like Top Gun start as one line written on a napkin at lunch - that simplicity proves the wide audience appeal.
could go several ways with this "napkin line"*:
~ the sales clerk voyeur/shopper exhibitionist.
~the store closing, clerk anxious to get to party, accepts sexual favours to unlock door (add a spouse or date , either waiting in the car, or whoring out the victim, and you've got another angle)
~ the inappropriate costume: the slut gets a nun costume; the PTA mom gets a hooker outfit; the macho football player gets that skimpy cheerleader costume made in oversize...
~ the nerdy sales clerk with no date gets invited to the party as a reward
or go a different way, not a store at all, but efforts to patch together something at home turn erotic - either incestuously or "just friends" become more (group/swap/same sex?)
* in Hollywood, they say that "high concept" movies like Top Gun start as one line written on a napkin at lunch - that simplicity proves the wide audience appeal.