Halloween story idea, figuring out specifics...

[sapphyrix]

I usually write bimbo fetish stuff, either bimbofication, or girls that are already bimbos having some escapades. So my idea I want to write is that either one bimbo or a group of 3 bimbo friends, in sexy bunny costume, goes to a haunted house attraction, which is mostly full of cheesy Halloween store animatronics, but has 1 real demon lurking in the darkness that they don't know about. Of course, the demon sees the bimbos in their little sexy bunny costumes, and the obvious happens. So the things I can't decide...

1) One bimbo or multiple bimbos?
a) one, she can be all alone for the demon to corner easily
b) multiple, they can interact with each other and the demon can have more fun :3

2) Noncon, totally consenting, or...?
a) the bimbo girl(s) find the demon totally hot and thus totally consenting, which feels a little boring but still fun
b) noncon, which might come out darker and more morbid than I want it to, but at least it wouldn't be boring?
c) the girl(s) start out scared and thus noncon, but the demon uses some type of magic to either seduce them or make them even more brain drained bimbos, and then they're practically begging for him...

3) POV character?
a) one or multiple bimbos, I could focus on their reaction to the demon and how they act for him
b) the demon, I could focus on the sexiness of the bimbos and how he enjoys them

Lemme know your thoughts. :3

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

No Non-Con!!!

Never.


Always full consent. Maybe some initial reluctance.


What if you did it from the Demon's view and it found out the girls weren't so innocent .... Think 'Charmed'. They're not the victims. They're hunting the Demon to vanquish it.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Fear is a powerful emotion and the relief of it, causes a powerful reaction in most people.
So this haunted house isn't a cheese-ball affair, but one of those really good ones, in an old house or factory. A local fraternity and sorority team up to put it on every year, with the assistance of a local benefactor, Mr. Eldritch, who is rather mysterious himself. Mr. Eldritch is secretly an incubus. A male demon who's aura makes women wildly horny. Combined with the fear, it's a powerful combination. You can add bimbos if you want, but it's not my thing.

 

[secretLace]

Good angle Rob. It could be a more studious serious girl who gets talked into dress up as a slut or a bimbo and during the night she becomes more and more her character as the demon influences the party?

 

[Rob_Royale]

Good angle Rob. It could be a more studious serious girl who gets talked into dress up as a slut or a bimbo and during the night she becomes more and more her character as the demon influences the party?

That's very good. Yes, the slutty cheerleader who always gets killed having sex, ala, Friday the 13th. In the display she's being attacked by a big masked slasher. As the incubus' aura begins to take hold of her, the man in the slasher costume is the nose tackle for their college football team. He's big and handsome and as sweet as can be. She's always had a crush on the big lug.

 

[PhoenixLord]

I'd go with a Trio of Bimbos.
I'd suggest the demon be an Incubus.
Start with one but have them summon other incubi for an orgy. Additionally, you could have the Haunted House be at one point home to a Sex Cult that worshipped Lucifer and their leader made a pact to lure women into having orgies every Halloween, starting with young women but eventually the pact was altered to allow for any horny women over consenting age, eventually leading to Bimbos being the most sought out target.

Don't do it as a Non-Con, make it more of a Fetish or Exhibitionist&Voyeur with Nonhuman aspects. Incubi can morph into what the bimbos find attractive, so make it totally consensual.

Lastly, I'd choose "privileged third person", which is focused on a single individual's perspective.

 

[Sams_Island]

One of my first published stories, https://www.literotica.com/s/wilder-west-ch-01, under my original profile of sams_island (https://www.literotica.com/authors/Sams_Island/works/stories), concerned a haunted house haunted by the spirit of a natural-born, happy slut.
For your story, first, I agree with the majority by saying no Non-Con.
But, if you're up for some comedy, what if the the three bimbos end up wearing out the demon? He lurks in this supposedly innocent haunted house, looking for the vulnerable who he can charm and bring under his power until he gets them to do things they normally wouldn't do, especially in a public place.
The three bimbos find themselves drawn to this haunted house, but they decide to go in at different times, so they can share their experiences later (like they tell each other about their latest sexual escapades). The demon finds and scores with Bimbo1, thinking, job done, he can fade back for another year feeling especially pleased with himself for getting the human to do some really raunchy things. But the second bimbo comes upon the dazed first bimbo, who tells her what a great fuck she just had and Bimbo2 gets to the demon before he goes back to Hell (or wherever) until next Halloween. He thinks he's corrupting another victim, which will earn him extra points with "the bosses". But Bimbo2 rides him hard and he's really ready to call it a night. But, look out, Bimbo 1 tells Bimbo3, who wants her turn too. By the end, the demon is begging to be allowed to go back to Hell, or maybe is even exorcised from the site so he can't attack any truly innocent people in future. The Bimbos save the world from evil!
Could certainly be from Demon's perspective as his world is turned upside down.

 

[Carnevil9]

1) One bimbo or multiple bimbos?
a) one, she can be all alone for the demon to corner easily
b) multiple, they can interact with each other and the demon can have more fun :3

I'd have the three bimbos. That way they can interact with each other to tell the story. More engaging than the reader only getting one bimbo's inner thoughts, or a dry narrator droning on with the play by play. They could be a blonde, a brunette, and a redhead so the readers can pick their favorite.

2) Noncon, totally consenting, or...?
a) the bimbo girl(s) find the demon totally hot and thus totally consenting, which feels a little boring but still fun
b) noncon, which might come out darker and more morbid than I want it to, but at least it wouldn't be boring?
c) the girl(s) start out scared and thus noncon, but the demon uses some type of magic to either seduce them or make them even more brain drained bimbos, and then they're practically begging for him...

I would go with the C option; they start out scared, but maybe a liiiiiiitle bit curious. Eventually they find the demon is exactly what they need. Maybe one of the girls is more adventurous than the others and is the first to take the plunge; then the other two can't wait to get their turn.

3) POV character?
a) one or multiple bimbos, I could focus on their reaction to the demon and how they act for him
b) the demon, I could focus on the sexiness of the bimbos and how he enjoys them

I'd make it one of the girls primarily, so the reader can make a connection. But I'd keep it in third person, so I can head-hop to the other girls to show their thoughts and experiences as well.

But those are just my thoughts. The other options could all lead to great stories, too,

 

[OttawaGuy50s]

Two girls, and they get separated in the house. One catched a glimpse of the 'demon' character and gets strangely aroused. She finds a dark room off the hallway and starts to touch herself. Bimbo #2 happens upon an adjacent room, she hears moans and whimpers and spies her gf playing, through a crack in the wall. Getting turned on herself, she starts touching herself. The demon watched them both through some form of hole in the walls or two way mirror.

Both return the next day, after both cumming in the semi-public place, and this time the demon enters the dark room and 'pleasures' one, then the other.

I could write 10,000 words on this!