Kinda-bdsm-related question about torture

marieR19

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First things first: *hugs* for everyone who responds!

Okay, I'm writing a very dark story, and I don't think I'd get many good responses in the Author part of the forums, so I'm asking here.

Anyone have any really good, inventive ways to torture someone to death? My main character is a very sadistic murderer who has non-consentual slaves, and I need her to kill a few of them... She's killed one by fucking her with a knife, but for the others I want something more drawn-out and inventive. Any suggestions?


Heather
 
Can't help, but if you're planning on posting on Literotica, you'll have to tone it down seriously. Lit won't touch snuff.
Not judging, just saying.
 
There must be many ways to kill someone in a BDSM activity but I'm not very brain stormy today.

Good luck with it though.

Fury :rose:
 
Once upon a time, I wrote what was {theoreticly} going to be the first two installments of a murder mystery.... Lit declined to publish the second installment ... Near as i can tell because a character dies... Heavens knows we can't have that in a story about murder eh?
In truth I was a bit amazed... Nothing in it was nearly as bad as most of what I read in the "Erotic Horror" section... Which I had perused to get an idea of "what is allowed"...
*shrug*
Essentially though... I would say this isn't the place to find the info you're after... Hmmm .......History would probably be a better source..
 
Evil_Geoff said:
Skinning alive... *shivvers*

In the last season of Buffy which I recently watched again, a mostly dismal and anger producing season for me, there was a rather wonderful scene with a demon stripping flesh off of Willow and eating it. I smiled and enjoyed it more than most scenes in that season.

Fury :rose:
 
*shudders* Fury, that was one of the only scenes I've ever watched in Buffy that made me feel ill.

Thanks for the concern guys, but this is definitely too dark to even think of submitting it to Lit... I have a very dark mind sometimes and I decided to write a story with all the darkest, most horrible things I could think of. lol


Heather
 
marieR19 said:
*shudders* Fury, that was one of the only scenes I've ever watched in Buffy that made me feel ill.

Thanks for the concern guys, but this is definitely too dark to even think of submitting it to Lit... I have a very dark mind sometimes and I decided to write a story with all the darkest, most horrible things I could think of. lol


Heather

I think that's a good thing to do with your darkest thoughts. I find when I write them out, it takes the power away from them somewhat.

As for that scene, well, I thought it was super cool! If you think about it, in a way Willow was killing herself. It was only because of her own spell that the others couldn't see and help her.

Fury :rose:
 
marieR19 said:
She's killed one by fucking her with a knife, but for the others I want something more drawn-out and inventive. Any suggestions?


Heather


Bury them alive. But first, wrap them up in a body suit filled with fire ants.
 
Some of these suggestions make me rather frightened of you people. Best add my own .02. :D

If you decide to do some sort of skinning, make sure the victim is suspended head down...so they stay alive longer. Oooh, papercuts and salt. Lots of paperrcuts. Read up on the Inquisition, those guys had some very intereting ideas. Like the method of death that involved a large pyramid, where the victim had the tip shoved up their anus and their own body weight forced it up very slowly so they died very slowly. Or putting a rat/cat/fox (I've heard all three) on someone's stomach in a cage and hot coals on top of the cage. The animal then eats through the person to get away from the fire.

Okay, I'm disturbing myself.

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BTW, I rather love the idea of knife fucking in fantasy anyway and wound fucking.

Man, y'all are so cruel! Anything where an animal or insect is eating me is mean, mean, mean.

LOL!

Fury :rose:
 
one torture technique is to lay a board on a person and add stones until the person confesses or whatnot, or dies.

the one male killed in the salem witch trials, silas someone or other, was executed that way.

it appeals to me for your story because it's something a woman could easily do - lift one stone at a time to crush someone... it's slow, you could torture the victim along the way, sexually, like, be crushing his torso with the rocks and doing things to his genetalia, which for the story could be conviniently erect... that sort of thing.
 
Of course you could do a rack scene where they get stretched so far tehy are dismembered...
 
omg that profile, lmao

and just when i thought it was over, the journal entries begin!
 
flaying is ok... I've lived through some flaying, it's not that bad. Pouring water over it after it's done is what's horrible.

i'd go for maybe slow roasting, or good ol crucifixion.
 
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